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Sun Sep 13, 2020 7:18 pm
momonster says...



thank you @Rosewood! i'll get to that soon.
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

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Tue Oct 06, 2020 7:02 pm
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Riverlight says...



@LordMomo Here's a poem I wrote last night

Dark Memories
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.
  





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Thu Oct 08, 2020 1:57 am
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Glauke says...



Hi, I'd love a review on my new piece! I'm specifically looking for thoughts and advice regarding the ending. Thanks in advance <3

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be still, sad heart, and cease repining
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Sun Oct 25, 2020 12:37 am
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Riverlight says...



Here ya go!

I Met a Senator Once
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.
  








It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien