I'm pausing this thread until further notice because I have challenged myself to review all of the works of several people. Feel free to leave a work here, it just might take me a while to get around to it.
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.
Vil wrote:I'm pausing this thread until further notice because I have challenged myself to review all of the works of several people. Feel free to leave a work here, it just might take me a while to get around to it.
This isn't going well at the moment, so I'm pausing this.
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.
Hey Vil! I have a work with no reviews and I really want to know how I can improve my writing. I'd be happy if you could take a look at it! It would be easier to understand by reading the former chapter/s, but that's totally up to you. Here's the link: Part 4: Water Plus Laptop
"Change roads, change vehicles, go where you don't know where you're going." -Abigail Docherty
Hi! If you could review this, that would be awesome! It's a chapter two, so not very far in but if it's too far in, that's ok
"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken" "Just because you're trash doesn't mean you can't do big things; It's trash can, not trash can't" Cowards die many times before their deaths; the valiant never taste of death but once
I have a Gumbie Cat in mind, her name is Jennyanydots; Her coat is one of the tabby kind,with tiger stripes and leopard spots. — T.S. Eliot, Old Possum's Book of Practical Cats
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