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Mon Jun 29, 2020 10:07 pm
Overwatchful says...



Hello, Stormblessed here!

I am willing to write reviews for works of any kind!
This includes:
Short stories
Multi chapter stories
Stream of consciousness
Essays
And poetry!

For the multi chapter stories, I may not necessarily read what came before. If that is the case, I will correct on grammar, punctuation, spelling, and flow, but not story.

I will post reviews for poetry.
I'm willing to review poetry, though I have not written a lot of poems myself.


I will not write reviews that are mature because of sex!
That sort of stuff is not what I need in my brain, so please don't ask me to write reviews for stories like that.


I will do this for free!

I mainly set this up because I want to gain review stars and points. Gifts are appreciated but not necessary! :mrgreen:

Just leave a message in this forum with a link and I will try to write a review in about 1-3 days.
And also, here are a few links to reviews I've done:
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/pizzapocket17/Chapter-1-The-not-so-great-Jimmy-147933#c692789

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/SummerBlues/Prologue-Beckoning-Ocean-147814#c691536

Thank you all!
Stormblessed242
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Thu Jul 16, 2020 1:11 am
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looseleaf says...



Hey Storm! I don't know if you will review essays, but if you do, I would appreciate a review on any of my essays! Although they all have two or more reviews, there's always something new that needs fixing. If you can't, or don't feel like it because they already have reviews, that's totally fine!
  





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Thu Jul 16, 2020 2:59 am
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Overwatchful says...



Sure! Is there a particular one you like me to review? Or should I just go ahead and pick?
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Thu Jul 16, 2020 2:41 pm
Overwatchful says...



Here it is!
heres your review!
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Fri Jul 17, 2020 2:09 pm
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looseleaf says...



I'm back to request another review. You can put it towards KotGR this time (depends on when you review it tho). You don't have to review it if you don't want to, but here's the link: My Essay on Dizzy Dean (1925 Words)
  





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Fri Jul 17, 2020 2:27 pm
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Overwatchful says...



I will definitely do it, though I don't know if I'll have time today,
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Sat Jul 18, 2020 10:13 pm
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Dizzy Dean
@LZPianoGirl, heres your review!
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Sun Jul 19, 2020 3:18 am
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KateHardy says...



Hi @Stormblessed242!!

Could you leave a review on the first chapter of my new novel?

The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead, Chapter 1.1
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Sun Jul 19, 2020 11:06 am
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Definitely!
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Mon Jul 20, 2020 12:16 pm
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Alpha Pack
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Mon Jul 20, 2020 12:34 pm
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Thanks again!!!
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Mon Jul 27, 2020 4:27 pm
KateHardy says...



Hey!! It's me again.

Could you look at the next part of chapter one as well?

The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead, Chapter 1.2
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Mon Jul 27, 2020 5:59 pm
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Overwatchful says...



Sure!
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