Hey Fraey! I have a work with no reviews and I really want to know how I can improve my writing. I'd be happy if you could take a look at it. It would be easier to understand by reading the former chapter/s, but that's totally up to you. Here's the link: Part 4: Water Plus Laptop
"Change roads, change vehicles, go where you don't know where you're going." -Abigail Docherty
Hi! If you could review this, that would be awesome!
"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken" "Just because you're trash doesn't mean you can't do big things; It's trash can, not trash can't" Cowards die many times before their deaths; the valiant never taste of death but once
I don't care what the miserable excuse is
for showing the death of books, live, on screen.
Men, I could understand; but books! - — Edwin Morgan, From the Video Box 2
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