Hey Fraey! I have a work with no reviews and I really want to know how I can improve my writing. I'd be happy if you could take a look at it. It would be easier to understand by reading the former chapter/s, but that's totally up to you. Here's the link: Part 4: Water Plus Laptop
"Change roads, change vehicles, go where you don't know where you're going." -Abigail Docherty
Hi! If you could review this, that would be awesome!
"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken" "Just because you're trash doesn't mean you can't do big things; It's trash can, not trash can't" Cowards die many times before their deaths; the valiant never taste of death but once
You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it. — Aldous Huxley, Brave New World
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