Hey Fraey! I have a work with no reviews and I really want to know how I can improve my writing. I'd be happy if you could take a look at it. It would be easier to understand by reading the former chapter/s, but that's totally up to you. Here's the link: Part 4: Water Plus Laptop
"Change roads, change vehicles, go where you don't know where you're going." -Abigail Docherty
Hi! If you could review this, that would be awesome!
"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken" "Just because you're trash doesn't mean you can't do big things; It's trash can, not trash can't" Cowards die many times before their deaths; the valiant never taste of death but once
This is a message to all you out there. You don't have to be the fastest writer. You don't have to write 2000 words in one sitting. But if you put your mind to it and really love your project, you can and will get further along than you ever thought possible. — FireEyes
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