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Beyond the review on what you think of the chapter, if you can tell me how much you can stand to read of the story as a whole, like if you would want to read more, that would be nice.
Hey Shima! Would you mind reviewing something of Still Stone? I'm sending you all I have so far -- feel free to read whatever part you'd like. (I didn't split up chapter one into multiple parts, so it comes off a little long -- my deepest apologies.) Still Stone - one. Still Stone - two. (part one.) Still Stone - two. (part two.)
Hello! I need reviews for anything from the Myriad series except the original version. I don't know how to make a link (which would be useful information should anyone choose to volunteer it), but here's what I've written so far.
The Myriad: Ascension Prologue The Myriad: Ascension Corso 1 The Myriad: Ascension Thørn 2 The Myriad: Ascension Nyx 3
Intrepid Explorer Squire of the Green Room Harbinger of the Cosmic Squid Brief Castaway Founder of Hermits United TIME Magazine's 2006 Person of the Year Dark Matter Overlord Kind of a Big Deal
Hi I would really like reviews for my realistic short story The Other Side I am writing it for a short story competition of which the deadline is tomorrow so if it can be done asap that would be really helpful thanks xx
“Rise like Lions after slumber
In unvanquishable number.
Shake your chains to earth like dew
Which in sleep had fallen on you—
Ye are many—they are few.” — Mary Shelly
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