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Wed Mar 23, 2016 2:40 pm
KaiTheGreater says...



Could you please take a look at my two latest poems, Untitled and You and Me and Infinity? Title suggestions for the second (yup, Y&M&I, got it ;) ) would be appreciated. That one's a little more rough overall, but for Untitled I'm mostly looking for input on the style.
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Wed Mar 23, 2016 10:33 pm
eldEr says...



*coughs*

oy. I would so much appreciate your thoughts on this.
Heartlines - Prologue

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Fri Mar 25, 2016 2:40 pm
RubyRed says...



It would be so very nice if you'd review this for me: The Heart of a Warrior ch. 1 Thanks! :D
You can't blame the writer for what the characters say.
— Truman Capote

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Fri Mar 25, 2016 4:33 pm
Deanie says...



Tomorrow morning shall be reviewing morning! I am going to get to these :3
Trust in God and all else follows.

Deanie, dominating the world since it was cool @Pompadour, 2014
Your username reminds me of a hotdog @Stegosaurus, 2015
Tried to make puns out of your username, but every attempt has been Deanied @Candywizard, 2015
  








I lingered round them, under that benign sky: watched the moths fluttering among the heath and harebells, listened to the soft wind breathing through the grass, and wondered how any one could ever imagine unquiet slumbers for the sleepers in that quiet earth.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights