Already asked around this forum for a couple o' reviews, but more is better! At the moment I only have two and my work is no longer in the green room- so if you have some time, please tear this apart for me.
(Just so you know, it's four compiled chapters of Luminous. I'd love reviews on all of it, but I'm fine if you only want to go over the first chapter)
Luminous
I hope to publish someday and I want you to treat this story as if it were about to go out on submission. I will not be upset if you tell me to rewrite everything about it.
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