Hi stempowered thanks for reviewing my first work. Would you please review the second chapter as well? The Ripper ? Who is that ? (chapter 2) It was actually written before your review so some mistakes ar still there. :p :p
Hey steamy I have a novel I have been writing for a while i would be very thankful if you could review my first chapter for me and give me a few tips on how I can improve my writing. Thanks and have a nice day. work/dracowave/The-Seven-Heavenly-Kings-Revamped-127074
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