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Mon Dec 20, 2010 7:56 pm
Tigersprite says...



Hey Tanya! Did I tell you about that story I was rewriting...well, I've put the Prologue up for some criticism. Your reviewing would be much appreciated! :D

Tiger
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Tue Dec 21, 2010 6:09 pm
LadySpark says...



hey born,
have time to review the rest of part 2? post795885.html#p795885
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Wed Dec 22, 2010 12:19 am
Eniarrol says...



Hello, :D
Could you please reveiw my first chapter (I am new to novel things)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic73594.html
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Thu Dec 23, 2010 8:28 pm
Orinette says...



Thanks so much for your review!
If it isn't too much to ask, could you please do Chapter 2 as well? I think that one went a little rockier than Chapter 1! Again, no rush, since you already reviewed something of mine. :wink:

viewtopic.php?t=73572

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Sun Dec 26, 2010 6:43 pm
borntobeawriter says...



Tiger, Pointe, Sweet and Orinette: your reviews are all completed! :D
  





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Mon Dec 27, 2010 4:18 pm
occasionalpessimist says...



Can you review my story The Question? Link on my portfolio.
Just a general thing, really. And thanks in advance!

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Fri Dec 31, 2010 6:44 pm
TheAlphaBunny says...



After checking out some of your other reviews, I think I'd really like your feedback. :} I have only two posts so far, either of which I'd love for you to check out and give me your thoughts.
Much love,
Bunny
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Sat Jan 01, 2011 5:01 pm
LadySpark says...



I sent you a P.M. but since you asked me to post it on your WRFF thread when I wanted a review here I am.

The last two parts of The stargazer please.

novel.php?id=864


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Pointe :pirate3: :pirate2:
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Sat Jan 01, 2011 8:41 pm
d@ydre@mer27 says...



Here Iam in your WRFF forum as you requested :)
Chapter 7 is up and waiting for you, I can't wait to hear from you again!
~day

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Sun Jan 02, 2011 2:19 pm
borntobeawriter says...



Bunny, Day, Pointe, done!
  





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Sun Jan 02, 2011 5:17 pm
LeanneWood says...



Hi, borntobeawriter. Could you review the first chapter of my story? 8D
topic74104.html
Thanks. :)
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Sun Jan 02, 2011 5:40 pm
borntobeawriter says...



Done, Leanne. Hope it helped! :D
  





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Sun Jan 02, 2011 5:44 pm
LeanneWood says...



Wow. God! You're fast. Thank you very much. ;)
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Sun Jan 02, 2011 9:13 pm
LadySpark says...



hey Tayna,
I am requesting a review for my new novel: The Magi.

I am very proud of it.
novel.php?id=976

PLEASE AND THANK YOU!
~pointe
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Mon Jan 03, 2011 9:38 am
MiaParamore says...



Hey, Mom.

Could you review this? I don't want much of it to be reviewed, just like a normal review. I kept it simple on purpose.

Know I'm Here(Prologue)

Thanks.
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