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Fri Nov 05, 2010 1:55 am
Idraax says...



I don't really know what this is, but I'm pretty sure that this does not fit into any of the categories that you said you won't review. It's only a scene, but I think there may be enough to work with. Only if you want to though. Thanks! http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=71546
Check these out please! :)
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Sun Nov 07, 2010 7:11 pm
d@ydre@mer27 says...



viewtopic.php?t=71409 Part 1
viewtopic.php?t=71712 Part 2

And then if you have time.......topic71691.html
This is all Historical Fiction, thank you in advance if you do decide to review :)
*daydreamer
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Fri Jan 21, 2011 5:45 am
Rascalover says...



I'm back!!! :) Anyone need a review?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Sat Jan 22, 2011 12:40 pm
Sins says...



Hey, Rascal. :)

I'm not sure if this is okay, but would you mind reviewing the fifth part of my novel for me...? Technically, it's chapter three, part one, so it's not too far into the novel.

topic75164.html

You may need to skim through the first two parts for it to make complete sense, but you wouldn't necessarily have to read the third or fourth part. Weird, I know, but it's a double POV novel, so there is some logic to it. You'll see what I mean. xD

Please and thank you!
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Sun Jan 23, 2011 10:53 pm
Rascalover says...



All done :)


Who's next? :pirate3:
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Fri Jan 28, 2011 8:12 pm
Rascalover says...



Who needs a review????
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Thu Feb 03, 2011 5:33 pm
Rascalover says...



Anyone need a review??
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Thu Feb 03, 2011 7:17 pm
Button says...



Hey there! Could you please take a look at this?

topic75824.html

Thanks!
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 8:32 pm
d@ydre@mer27 says...



I would love someone from a different perspective to look over and review my novel, and I found you!
I'll post chapters 1-3 for you to look over and see if you're interested.

Just a little background, it's under Historical Fiction and it's centered around the Holocaust. It seems to be a subject not many are interested in on this site and it's been difficult to find reviewers for it. It is a hard read, I will warn you in advance!
I hope you will look it over and thanks in advance if you decide to :)
~day

viewtopic.php?t=71691
topic71986.html
topic72296.html
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Tue Feb 08, 2011 10:44 pm
Rascalover says...



All done :)
Awesome work you guys!

Who needs a review next?
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Wed Feb 09, 2011 1:31 am
silented1 says...



topic75693.html

The last poem, please. It's untitled. Thank you.
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Link to my will review for food thread: topic71713.html
  





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Wed Feb 09, 2011 1:48 am
Rascalover says...



All done.

Who else needs a review?
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Thu Feb 10, 2011 4:17 am
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:) Anyone needs a review?
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Fri Feb 11, 2011 9:01 am
writerwithacause says...



Good day! (: I have a new story, I am new to this website as well, so a review would be very useful. Here it is, just one chapter: viewtopic.php?t=76160

Thanks for taking your time!
Julie, a sucker for romance, historical fashion, medieval fairs and blues music. Add photography and you already know me 50%. The rest of me you'll discover through my writings and my photos.

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Wed Mar 16, 2011 10:04 pm
Rascalover says...



All done,
Who needs a review next? :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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