"No life is forever. We found and fought here. We loved and died here... The crops whither and the bones of hunger walk the sunken roads... The land has failed us... In dance and song we gift and mourn our children. They carry us over the ocean in dance and song. -American Wake by Riverdance
I just finished reading the first chapter of your novel and plan to continue. I'd love to trade reviews with you if you have the time. I'd much rather have reviews on my work than extra points. If you're interested, you can find the first few chapters at 71017 and 71023. That will give you a chance to get to know a little of the story before you decide if you want to commit to the whole thing. It's really long (almost 100,000/ 35 chapters of at least 4 pages each) and I've heard that it's really difficult to find people who are willing to stick with a story that is so long. I want to do one final readthrough before I post the complete novel but it should be up by next weekend in the Advanced Critique section. I really appreciate any reviewing you have time to do, even if you aren't able to continue all the way through the whole novel. I'll get back to your novel as soon as I have a break from my homework. Hopefully in the next day or two.
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