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Fri Oct 01, 2010 4:59 pm
SilentRain says...



Hello, me agian, this is another poem I'd like for you to review...

topic70088.html

Thanks,

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!
  





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Fri Oct 08, 2010 2:14 pm
Rascalover says...



All done.

Who needs a review :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Fri Oct 08, 2010 8:18 pm
Celticmusicgirl says...



pls review my newest fanfic topic70355
"No life is forever. We found and fought here. We loved and died here... The crops whither and the bones of hunger walk the sunken roads... The land has failed us... In dance and song we gift and mourn our children. They carry us over the ocean in dance and song.
-American Wake by Riverdance
  





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Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:21 am
Rascalover says...



The link didn't work can you give me the title of it? Then I can find it in your profile. :)

Until then who's next?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Thu Oct 21, 2010 1:08 am
Rascalover says...



who's next? :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Fri Oct 22, 2010 12:48 am
Roal says...



Hey there RascaLover!

I wonder if you will review my The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer - Ch. 1

Merci Beacoup!
14 years have passed
And yet I'm unabled
To find a friend
For my existence is lower
Than a piece of grass.
  





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Mon Oct 25, 2010 2:32 am
emmily says...



I just finished reading the first chapter of your novel and plan to continue. I'd love to trade reviews with you if you have the time. I'd much rather have reviews on my work than extra points. If you're interested, you can find the first few chapters at 71017 and 71023. That will give you a chance to get to know a little of the story before you decide if you want to commit to the whole thing. It's really long (almost 100,000/ 35 chapters of at least 4 pages each) and I've heard that it's really difficult to find people who are willing to stick with a story that is so long. I want to do one final readthrough before I post the complete novel but it should be up by next weekend in the Advanced Critique section.
I really appreciate any reviewing you have time to do, even if you aren't able to continue all the way through the whole novel. I'll get back to your novel as soon as I have a break from my homework. Hopefully in the next day or two.
  





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Mon Oct 25, 2010 6:35 pm
Rascalover says...



I would love to. :) Still working on the reviews guys, thanks for being patient.
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Tue Oct 26, 2010 1:01 am
Rascalover says...



Who's next :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Tue Oct 26, 2010 3:06 am
Lena.Wooldridge says...



topic71127.html

Thank you :)
stay gold, ponyboy
  





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Fri Oct 29, 2010 8:08 am
itsjustemilie says...



Hi,
if you will, I have a piece of dramatic poetry, thats lonely without reviews
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic71281.html
:) it would be lovely to have some feedback
ItJustEmilie!
  





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Sun Oct 31, 2010 6:23 pm
Rascalover says...



Thanks for the request guys. I hope the reviews were helpful.

Who's next?!
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Sun Oct 31, 2010 8:36 pm
iGlamour says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=71348

Hey, please review this. It's just a short prologue, and I'm new-ish to writing so I'd really appreciate any help and advice that I can get. Thanks!
We did it, we bashed them, wee Potter's the one,
And Voldy's gone moldy, so now let's have fun!

Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows
Peeves' Victory Song.
  





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Sun Oct 31, 2010 10:51 pm
Rascalover says...



All done. :) Who's next?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Thu Nov 04, 2010 7:53 pm
Rascalover says...



anyone?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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