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Hi @Necromancer14 thank you so much for requesting another review, and that one is now completed.

This fort is open ^.^
name: key/string/perks
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novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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Could you review my horror poem, please? If you don't like horror, it's fine, you don't have to, but here it is:
They are coming
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

Gandalf: "YOU SHALL NOT PASS!"




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Hello EditorAndPerks !


I like the insights in your reviews and I was hoping you could review the second draft of this first villanelle I wrote — Last walk (2nd draft)

I don't need anything too detailed , just some main pointers for a next draft. I'm trying to improve the work since editing is my weak point.

Thanks!




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I normally don't request reviews and I don't know if you're open to reviewing novel chapters or what your content guidelines are but I can really use some reviews on the few chapters I have in the green room from my story "Within my Blood" if you are at all possible
"So come with me where Dreamers are born and Time is never planned, Just think of happy things, And your heart will fly on wings, in Never Never Land."-Peter Pan

"Life is the art of Drawing... without an eraser."




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Sorry I didn't get to that review @Necromancer14 but I did see that you got decent feedback on that work. ^^ I've enjoyed reading The Cosmic Dragon a lot!

@Traves Thanks for the review request, and I hope that helped!

@myjaspercat I'm going to try to review at least one chapter of yours a day (and if I like your Green Room chapters I might review the rest as well because I'm hoping to complete Team Tortoise c:)
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Yo, I'm stupid and gay. I'm pretty bad at writing. I'm beginning to write a story called
Pain For The Game
Though it's not Done yet. It's in the green room I guess. Just wanted to know what you think of my crappy work
Yours sincerely - CatAmp




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Heya :) If you're still accepting reviews, I've got a poem called what to write? that I'd like reviewed. It's not too long so it shouldn't take up too much time.
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Alright, review update time!

@myjaspercat Reviewed chapter 2, will continue with this story in the next few days.
@Catamp Will review this tomorrow!
@Liberty Hopefully in two days I'll review this. ^^
name: key/string/perks
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novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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@Catamp Finished with your review!

I will get to the other requests starting tomorrow ^^


All review requests are finished so the fort is reopened.
Last edited by keystrings on Fri Jun 19, 2020 3:06 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Hello @EditorandPerks

Is the fort open?
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Hello @HarryHardy and the fort is back open! I should edit the previous message ^^
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Ok good to hear!

Could you take a look at the first two chapters of my novel!

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 1

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 2

I think the first one has enough reviews but it would help you to read through it and I'd like your thoughts on the second chapter.
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Thanks for the requests @HarryHardy ! The reviews are complete.

This fort is open once more.
name: key/string/perks
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Hello @EditorAndPerks,

I'm back. Could you take a look at chapter three of my novel too?

Here's the link: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 3
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Thanks for the request @HarryHardy ! Your review is now finished.

The fort is open again ^^
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)



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