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Sat Mar 31, 2018 2:02 am
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keystrings says...



Welcome to my WRFF thread!

I've had this thread for a looooong time so I figured I would revamp it once I regreened again. So, welcome.

I am willing to review anything! Feel free to click through some of the requests/types of works that users have asked over the last few years. I do find it fun to read things I haven't in a while or follow a new story/going back and reviewing old chapters of a work in order to get to the chapters left in the Green Room.

If you'd like something specific to be reviewed, please just leave those details in a specific message in this thread, and feel free to ask any questions!
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name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2018 4:35 pm
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eiaeh9 says...



Title of Piece: Ballerinas Out of the Wings
Type of Piece: Halfway between a short story and flash fiction
Any other comments: I am trying to make it fairly psychological so it would be great if you could mention your own personal emotional reaction if you want.
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2018 6:15 pm
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MasterAvi says...



Hey can you review my prison escape introduction and chapter 1 please?
Thank you :)
The Running Man Introduction and Chapter 1
  





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Mon Apr 16, 2018 6:15 pm
keystrings says...



Done! Thanks for your requests @eiaeh9 and @MasterAvi! I hope those reviews were helpful!
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Mon Apr 23, 2018 12:02 am
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elysian says...



untitled - chapter one

review for this??
elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

formally lylas.
  





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Mon Apr 23, 2018 2:58 am
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keystrings says...



@elysian done! I hope that was helpful XD
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Tue Apr 24, 2018 7:12 pm
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Lightsong says...



Please review Chapter 16.2: Ilami. :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Wed Apr 25, 2018 2:48 am
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keystrings says...



Alright, done @Lightsong. I hope that was helpful!
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Wed May 02, 2018 7:00 pm
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Kanome says...



You reviewed this story before, Kille. This has been redrafted. Let me know what you think?

Six Month Journey [Chapter One]
PROTECTOR OF LIGHT
Knight of the Green Room
  





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Fri May 04, 2018 1:20 am
keystrings says...



Finally done @Kanome! I hope that was helpful XD
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Fri May 04, 2018 2:15 am
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Kanome says...



@killeham thanks! Is the story better in first person or third person?
PROTECTOR OF LIGHT
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Fri May 04, 2018 2:23 am
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keystrings says...



You're welcome @Kanome! And I like it more in third person, but that's typically my preference in any novel XD.
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Mon May 21, 2018 8:34 am
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Emmzziee says...



Hi, Killeham! Can you review my little story, please? I'd be forever grateful :D

Ziva Beaver - a children's story
I want to play a game.
  





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Wed May 23, 2018 9:26 pm
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keystrings says...



Finally complete @Emmzziee! Hope that helped!
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Thu Jul 19, 2018 10:05 pm
keystrings says...



Bumping this as open for business. And yeah, I'll review anything!
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  








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