I had no idea where to put this, so if this place seems wrong let me know. I'm hoping to get some decent feedback on this. I wrote this in April. Enjoy.
Four squared and below, born in a leap year
Surrounded by goldenrod and stringed shadows
That pluck away silently in the night
And etch away their surroundings piece by piece
Until all that's left is his broken romance
And a lie upon his cheek.
Elly, darling,
Where is your worldress?
Tell me, darling,
Where is my infared, where is my soldier,
Where is my monster, where is my truth?
Where are flashing white pieces of me
Gathered in elegant, dark places
And satiny shadows of yesterdays spent gathered
Inside myself, inside my last piece of this,
My music and life,
Where is my life inside the infared, beyond their radar,
Tucked inside the pearly pockets of boys with
Guitar picks smacked with tiny pit-pats between their lips
Strumming out the words of delusion I gather
Inside myself for the time being.
He is my last, my one out of four, my guilty pleasure,
My not-quite sorrow, my mystery novel, and everything else.
The blue interior of the things I wish for on red stars over swingsets,
And the exterior of all my faults.
You, my sensation,
My very first sentimental longing outside the eye,
I am your worldress, your lipstick, your chalice of crystalized symphonies,
Your kamikaze, and your alternate ending
With a breath against your mouth as I inhale
The songs and stories inside you
As guitars play themselves with such abandon
While musicians make love against your reflection in the sky
That are too cold for themselves
With girls who are not my opposite but myself
Another sameness, another piece of me tucked away
Inside of you, us...
Inside our spiral shell inside of the mind of something
More powerful than dreams of androgynous figures
Leaning against telephone polls, underneath hanging black wires
That race to the sky
A look on their mouths,
And fourteen away from the last spoken word
And the disconnection of the fingertips
And cells.
(We are all disconnected.)
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