Young Writers Society

How long shall you judge unjustly,
And accept the persons of the wicked?
Defend the poor and needy,
Take them out of oppression.
They know not,
Neither do they understand.
They walk in the street of ignorance.
All the earth are out of course.
For now do you judge,
But you shall be buried like them,
And fall as one of their princes.

this is brilliant
how did u get the idea for it
i wish i could write as well as u
keep writing

It's a good concept. There's not really anything I would change about it, except, next time, could you not capitalize all your letters in your title? It really didn't seem necessary at all to the poem, and I didn't expect to be serious about it before reading it.

It is a good poem, but it seems to lack a good ending to it. FOr instance, you develop it well, and then you just leave it hanging. Why? Conclude it.