Hey, this is an awesome poem. I am a believer, and I think you are doing an awesome job of living out your beliefs. Back to your poem. I could really relate to this. I like how it kinda lead up to something at the end. Awesome! Keep writing.
The wince that you wince when you see your quote in the quote generator is quite a wince, I tell ya. To know that the whole YWS community has read and judged your quote is quite an awkward feeling like oh noes.
*manly blush* — Arcticus