God Knew

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casey_kent
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Sun Mar 30, 2008 9:23 am
casey_kent says... · Sun Mar 30, 2008 9:23 am
I loved the poem! It made me tear up.
Christianity is not a religion, it's a relationship.

I may not be perfect but Jesus thinks I'm to die for.

"Let's destroy these little darlings..."- W.Beckett
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Shoryu
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Sun Mar 30, 2008 9:53 am
Shoryu says... · Sun Mar 30, 2008 9:53 am
I really enjoyed this poem, I liked the way you had the rhyme scheme and I sorta've had a melody going along in my head as I read it.

Please, Keep writing more :)
Shoryu
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vet4life13
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Thu Apr 10, 2008 11:43 pm
vet4life13 says... · Thu Apr 10, 2008 11:43 pm
Hey, this is an awesome poem. I am a believer, and I think you are doing an awesome job of living out your beliefs. Back to your poem. I could really relate to this. I like how it kinda lead up to something at the end. Awesome! Keep writing.
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