Following Nate's rules, I will be posting my novel here in sections of approximately 5000 words, at least as close as my chapters will allow. Take your time in your critiques, and I hope you enjoy.
Synopsis (A.K.A. Jacket Story)
Conall Rivers, a young man who once lived in a junkyard and fought for a living, has just gotten his life in a direction where he wants it. When his past catches up to him though, his future takes a turn he cannot comprehend. Now, in a strange new world he knows nothing about, and coming to terms with his new identity within it, he must fight for his survival as he searches for a way home.
But there's even more at stake than he realizes, and like it or not, he's about to become the focal point of something that will not only determine the future of this strange world, but perhaps even his own as well. And as Conall struggles to write his own future, he will uncover a secret buried deep within his history that will shake the very foundations of his life.
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