So this is where you come in. I'd love your opinion on the two pieces posted below. They are exactly identical except for Victor's dialogue, and I'd like you to focus on dialogue and actions rather than details. It would be nice if you could tell me which you preferred: Victor V1 or Victor V2?
I have one more question before I let you see V1 vs. V2. This is mainly out of personal curiosity: how would you pronounce the name 'Kaissiah?'
V1
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V2
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Thank you if you managed to read through all that. xD I hope it didn't give too much away from the plot.
Note :: the character's voice will probably not be /exactly/ like either of the two above, but it's a close enough example. :'p
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