I thought of a story the other day, and thought it would be pretty good. Can I get your opinion???
here it is:
Lucy Cavenshaw is a seventeen year old living in 19th century England. She has grown up in the sheltered life of aristocracy,as her father is a railway magnate and is very influential in the upper crusts of English society.
One day her parents inform her that they are moving across to the new colony of Western Australia, to live on a sheep station in the outback. Lucy is horrified at this thought, and doesn't want to go. She is eventually persuaded by a close friend of her father's, Sir William Cleaver Francis Robinson, the Governor of Western Australia at the time, and Lucy's sort of idol.
Once in Western Australia, Lucy finds out the hard way that life in the outback is a lot different to life at home, from the searing heat and the flies, to the people she meets. The Cavenshaws move into the homestead and sheep station of Girawheen Downs, Girawheen meaning place of flowers. Lucy finds it hard to fit in with the local children of Girawheen and those on the farm. She shuts herself up in the house, reading books and writing letters to her brother Tom, who is at university at Cambridge.
One day, while bathing in a watering hole not far from the main house, Lucy meets Edward McAvoy, the son of the head farmer. Edward challenges everything that Lucy has ever known, from her manners to her society and her choice in books. This rattles Lucy, but the pair end up realising that they are in love with each other.
After a year in WA, Lucy's father committs suicide, and the family find out that the reason they moved to WA in the first place was because Henry Cavenshaw owed lots of money to people, and was running away from his debts. He committed suicide to prevent the people looking for him to kill him and his family. Lucy's mother moves back to England before Lucy can say goodbye to Edward.
Back in England, Lucy is feeling resentment towards her father for lying to them. Not willing to admit it, Lucy is missing Western Australia and Edward in particular.
However, her mother and brother have plans for her, to introduce Lucy back into proper society so that she can find a husband. There are two prospects : Lord Mitchell Rawdon, a good friend of Tom's from university, and the handsome and ever so rich Jeremy Fischer.
However, when someone unexpectedly turns up in London, Lucy's world is turned upside down once again.
That's the main outline for the story, and I was thinking of calling something like Across the Great Divide, even though it's the name of the Silverchair/Powderfinger tour.
What do you think??
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