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Tue Mar 11, 2008 11:42 pm
chocoholic says...



Blind eyes:

post318521.html#318521
*Don't expect to see me around much in the next couple of weeks. School has started again, and it'll be a couple of weeks before I've settled in. If you've asked me for a critique, you will get it, but not for a little while. Sorry*
  





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Sat Mar 29, 2008 3:01 pm
MidnightVampire says...



I critiqued this piece of yours, chocoholic:
post331164.html#331164
Moving to fast
I realized that I said I'd be gone for only two weeks...but I was gone for much longer.I hope to stay on this time. :)
  





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Sat Mar 29, 2008 3:15 pm
aestar101 says...



topic27741.html
Character is what you have left when you've lost everything you can lose. - Evan Esar
Like my opinions a lot? Let me critique you. topic29146.html
  





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Wed Apr 02, 2008 2:17 pm
Gadi. says...



aestar, did you crit any of Vamp's work?

post335428.html#335428
my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away
  





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Sun Apr 13, 2008 11:16 am
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chocoholic says...



Wildfire

topic28147.html

Please don't critique Moving Too fast or My Sister is an Actress. I am not continuing with those stories, and will have them deleted soon.
*Don't expect to see me around much in the next couple of weeks. School has started again, and it'll be a couple of weeks before I've settled in. If you've asked me for a critique, you will get it, but not for a little while. Sorry*
  





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Tue Apr 22, 2008 10:06 pm
teenweirdo says...



post352098.html#352098

Sorry I chose this. I'm acting really dumb today.
"You can't always get what you want, but if you try sometimes you get what you need."

-The Rolling Stones
  





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Wed Apr 23, 2008 10:57 pm
CK Lynn says...



www.youngwriterssociety.com/post351401.html#351401
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Wed Apr 23, 2008 11:20 pm
Kylan says...



post353182.html

PS: I could really use some help with my novel rewrites.

-Kylan
"I am beginning to despair
and can see only two choices:
either go crazy or turn holy."

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Mon May 26, 2008 11:51 am
smorgishborg says...



Crossing the Rubicon

Can this topic be stickied? Or has it been made obsolete by the "crit for food" forum. I think this one's kinda fun...
The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
- Robert Frost

It cost $7 million to build the Titanic, and $200 million to make a film about it.
The plastic ties on the end of shoelaces are called aglets
  





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Thu Jun 05, 2008 6:04 pm
coryab222 says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post378046.html#378046
How hard can it be to just let go and drift away with the wind?
  





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Thu Jun 05, 2008 7:18 pm
Deifyance says...



I thought this was good

Bearer of the Rubyarc
Check out my current Series: Changing Legacy

Chapter 1
Changing Legacy: Chapter 1 - Disheartening

Chapter 2
Changing Legacy: Chapter 2 - Ambushed
  





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Sun Jun 08, 2008 4:18 pm
Raimunda says...



My Art. YEY!!!!!!!!

You know you'll do it cos I'm just so darn loveable.
I just hit my computer
Because it was being slow
I need my daily Smallville fix
And it will not load the video.
  





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Mon Jun 09, 2008 12:45 am
smorgishborg says...



Raimunda,

A simple check of the previous posts on this page would have revealed the way this thread works. You don't get critiques by directing people to your work. Nor for writing like a cheerleader.

Deifyance,

[s]Uh.... you haven't written anything.[/s] - Just give me a PM when you have something you need.

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Therefore, I've critiqued Dimension of Music by coryab
The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
- Robert Frost

It cost $7 million to build the Titanic, and $200 million to make a film about it.
The plastic ties on the end of shoelaces are called aglets
  





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Tue Jun 10, 2008 8:45 pm
Icaruss says...



I didn't forget about you: post380677.html#380677

Invasion of the Penis Snatchers, man.
there are many problems in our times
but none of them are mine
  





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Tue Jun 10, 2008 10:18 pm
aestar101 says...



Gadi., Vamp's piece is locked.
Character is what you have left when you've lost everything you can lose. - Evan Esar
Like my opinions a lot? Let me critique you. topic29146.html
  








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