Um, Ben... Firstly, swearing is confined to the Lit. Forums. Secondly, this is not a place to advertise your poem - it's a place to talk about yourself.
Simply edit your post to X and title to Attention:Please Delete.
Cheers,
Lily.
PS: Posts are supposed to be 2:1 - if you post a piece of work, you have to make at least two reviews for it.
Trust me, you'd be surprised how many kids are on these forums...but then again, it is called Young Writers Society so you should probably have expected nothing less...
With that said, I'll take a look at your poem, if I can find the time for it.
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