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Tue Jul 27, 2010 12:06 pm
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iceprincess says...



Hello there! Welcome to Iceprincess's Royal Reviews! :D Please do request, because:

1) I want to meet new people and read their stories! I might be a bit harsh, and I admit that I am a grammar Nazi, but I enjoy reading every single one of yours, unless it's unreadable.

2) I want to become a better reviewer.

With your help, I'll accomplish everything on this list! :D

On with the important stuff!

Things I like to review:

Short stories:
Fantasy
Romance
Historical Fiction
General Fiction
Science-Fiction

Novels:
Fantasy
General Fiction
Romance
Historical Fiction

Scripts


What I might review:

Action/Adventure novels/short stories
As long as there's no horrible descriptions of insects (particularly spiders), then I'll probably give it a shot.

Art/Photography
I'm not too good at reviewing art, but I promise I'll do my best!


What I'm particularly bad at reviewing:

Lyrics
Poems



What I don't really want to review:

Fanfics. Especially of the Twilight variety.
'Nuff said.

If you're going to request a novel or an advanced critique, it will take a lot of time, so be patient, guys. ;D
Also, please provide a link to your work, because it's honestly quite tiring to search through every single one of your posts just to find one short story. :wink:

Anyways, PM me if you have any questions! :D

Cheerios,
Iceprincess/Rosie =]
Last edited by iceprincess on Sat Sep 18, 2010 6:14 am, edited 2 times in total.
you'll never find another sweet little girl with sequined sea foam eyes
ocean lapping voice, smile coy as the brightest quiet span of sky
and you're all alone again tonight; not again, not again, not again.
and don't it feel alright, and don't it feel so nice? lovely.


  





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Thu Aug 05, 2010 9:41 am
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seeminglymeaningless says...



Thank you for reviewing my work, Rosie. You did an impressive and in depth critique! I hope other people approach you to review your work, as everything you said about my story was cohesive and coherent and very well thought out.

Thank you again, so much :D

- Jai
I have an approximate knowledge of many things.
  





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Thu Sep 16, 2010 10:32 pm
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LindsayG says...



hey, i just joined, i have two posts, one prologue for a novel and a first episode for a series, can you please check it out and tell me what you think? would really mean a lot
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Fri Sep 17, 2010 2:11 am
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Firearris says...



Hey Ice, do a review for me? :D

topic69428.html?hilit=coconuts%20september
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

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Fri Sep 17, 2010 3:39 pm
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Jalmoc says...



Hi, do you think you could look this over? I just finished it. Thanks! :D topic69557.html#p763658
If you don't take a chance, you'll always live your life in regret, so let your heart show it's true colors and admit your feelings!

Tis not the blade that took your life, but the Assassin behind it.

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Sat Sep 18, 2010 6:13 am
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iceprincess says...



Lindsay, Firearris, and Jalmoc, I've finished all of your requests already! Once again, thanks for requesting and if you have any questions about the review, you can always PM me. :D
you'll never find another sweet little girl with sequined sea foam eyes
ocean lapping voice, smile coy as the brightest quiet span of sky
and you're all alone again tonight; not again, not again, not again.
and don't it feel alright, and don't it feel so nice? lovely.


  





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Sun Sep 19, 2010 3:57 am
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seeminglymeaningless says...



Hey Rosie :)

Wanna review my submission for the September Contest?

SNAFU

You don't have to, of course :)

- Jai
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Thu Oct 07, 2010 12:21 am
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screamandshout says...



viewtopic.php?t=70331

Hey would you mind reveiwing this for me? Please and thank you.
  





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Thu Oct 07, 2010 1:26 pm
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iceprincess says...



Jai, you know I've finished yours (XD), and screamandshout I'll get to yours as soon as possible. :D
you'll never find another sweet little girl with sequined sea foam eyes
ocean lapping voice, smile coy as the brightest quiet span of sky
and you're all alone again tonight; not again, not again, not again.
and don't it feel alright, and don't it feel so nice? lovely.


  





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Fri Oct 08, 2010 1:58 pm
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Jalmoc says...



I've got another, if your up for it. :)

viewtopic.php?t=70131
If you don't take a chance, you'll always live your life in regret, so let your heart show it's true colors and admit your feelings!

Tis not the blade that took your life, but the Assassin behind it.

When Reality has all but fallen away, recreate your own world
  





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Sat Oct 09, 2010 3:02 pm
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iceprincess says...



Jalmoc, screamandshout, I've already finished reviewing your works! They were both pretty good. :wink:

So, anyone else who needs a review? :D
you'll never find another sweet little girl with sequined sea foam eyes
ocean lapping voice, smile coy as the brightest quiet span of sky
and you're all alone again tonight; not again, not again, not again.
and don't it feel alright, and don't it feel so nice? lovely.


  





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Sun Oct 17, 2010 7:50 am
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IgnisandGlacialis says...



Hello, Iceprincess!
I was wondering if you could review this for me:
viewtopic.php?t=69991
... It's the first part in a fantasy novel I'm writing.
I know that everyone's time is limited, so don't feel like you have to rush, but I'd love it if you could give some feedback.
Thank you so much,
Ignis :pirate3:
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A thousand times it calls your name
A thousand times you hear it
And fools are those who heed its call
But fools are those who fear it.


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Mon Oct 18, 2010 8:03 pm
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jDawn says...



Hey! Review this for me? post774728.html#p774728 Thanks!
"They can put me in prison but they can't stop my face from breakin' out."

" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

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Sat Oct 23, 2010 2:18 pm
iceprincess says...



Both Fire's and jDawn's are finished! Anyone else? :D
you'll never find another sweet little girl with sequined sea foam eyes
ocean lapping voice, smile coy as the brightest quiet span of sky
and you're all alone again tonight; not again, not again, not again.
and don't it feel alright, and don't it feel so nice? lovely.


  





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Sat Oct 23, 2010 11:45 pm
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Jashael says...



Hello!!! Please review this for me novel.php?id=661 Thanks! =))
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