Song Poems Contest

26 posts1, 2
User avatar
Gender Other
Points 300
Reviews 417
Count me in. No Heavy Metal or Rock. Possibly either CAKE or Watsky. Any other would be fine

"Words say little to the mind compared to space thundering with images and crammed with sounds."

stranger, strangelove, drstrangelove, strange, willard




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 2762
Reviews 123
@SaraiRayne your song is Everything is Cool by NeverShoutNever

@Storybraniac your song is Hurricane by Brigit Mendler. The idea is to take a song and base a poem off of it in some way. Please don't turn the song into a poem.

@ERZA your song is Rebel Beat by the Goo Goo Dolls.

@Strange, your song is The Distance by CAKE
Last edited by FatCowsSis on Sun Feb 09, 2014 8:56 pm, edited 1 time in total.
What do you call a cow with no legs?
Spoiler
Ground Beef




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 1356
Reviews 29
hey, I am interested in the contest as well. Nothing modern or pop. While I'd be content with any good classic rock song, I'd probably like to do some Floyd. You can pick though. THere's more to them than just Dark Side of the Moon
"Often, the best way to improve is swallowing your ego and realizing you're a terrible writer in all aspects of writing, then working to improve it."
-R.U.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 830
Reviews 208
Me, me, me! I'd love to do this. I love The Beatles, Rolling Stones, Ed Sheeran, Kate Nash, Florence + the Machine, Lily Allen, and Never Shout Never. Pretty much anything not country, really.
Your head is a living forest full of song birds
~E. E. Cummings




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 2762
Reviews 123
@Spotswood I"M SOOOOOO SORRY!!! I didn't see your response till now O_O Hmmmmm, not modern. Well, I don't see this being your thing, but I'm going to give you Bohemian Rhapsody by Mnozil Brass. It's a bit.....different. If you don't like it I can change it! Most people think it's really weird...

@rhiasofia HIIII! I've been seeing you everywhere lately! Your song is Eleanor Rigby by the Beatles.
What do you call a cow with no legs?
Spoiler
Ground Beef




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 830
Reviews 208
Thanks! I love you for choosing that one :D
Your head is a living forest full of song birds
~E. E. Cummings




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 2762
Reviews 123
No prob! I played it in orchestra and it was the first that popped into mind!
What do you call a cow with no legs?
Spoiler
Ground Beef




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 830
Reviews 208
Ode to Eleanor

It is done!
Your head is a living forest full of song birds
~E. E. Cummings




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 39955
Reviews 1288
I posted mine a while back but I wasn't sure about editing it. As it is I probably won't have time so here it is.

No One Ever Makes It
"You do ill if you praise, but worse if you censure, what you do not understand." Leonardo Da Vinci

<YWS><R1>




Random avatar
Gender Female
Points 668
Reviews 131
Okay, at long last here's my entry. It's on the song Secrets by One Republic. I tried to make it a villanelle, don't know how well that went though.

Flakes

My skin is just flakes
Shrouding the secrets that make me whole -
So, from the truth, I can continue to escape.

Metamorphosing at every chance I can take,
I reform myself because I know
My skin is just flakes.

With each new persona, each new mask I create;
After every shedding, every bleeding of my secrets: I feel hope-
So, from the truth, I can continue to escape.

My fear of being forgotten, becoming the ordinary, the sane -
Helps keep my facade on, as my soul disintegrates. I still go on, though
My skin is just flakes.

This honest dishonesty has kept me from becoming a forgotten fate.
All the secrets they would hurdle to hear, keep me from getting bored.
So, from the truth, I can continue to escape.

Sometimes, even I doubt all my pretense. Now it's become all I hate.
And as a somebody, who is a real nobody I roam.
My skin is just flakes,
So, from the truth, I can continue to escape.
"The duke had a mind that ticked like a clock and, like a clock, it
regularly went cuckoo."
-- Terry Pratchett, "Wyrd Sisters"




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 2762
Reviews 123
Hey all! For those who have not submitted their poems...SUBMIT THEM! (I can't say that any nicer. :P)

@Aley @SecreteJournalist
PM me me & I'll send you guys what you need.

EVERYONE
I'll post winners once we judges have done our judging. But it's kinda hard to judge when we don't have anything to judge, yes?
What do you call a cow with no legs?
Spoiler
Ground Beef



we went from advice to meth real quick
— ShadowVyper