Help me finish a novel

I'm not looking for actual help with writing the book, but I would greatly appreciate so creative inputs as I push to finish my novel. I have posted the first three parts of the novel as an introductory, of sorts, of the three main families the first novel will revolve around. I would like to wield a fan following that will help guide me to the books completion. I am going to upload a new chapter to YWS as I write them.

I ask for immediate feedback and personal thoughts or creative ideas on where you could see the story turn...or how I can keep the story progressing. It is all about perspective, and I want to open myself to views of many!

The links are in order of the book:

work.php?id=100932
work.php?id=100935
work.php?id=100946

LET ME KNOW ESPECIALLY IF YOU CHOOSE A FAVORITE CHARACTER! I LOOK FORWARD TO THE INPUT OF MY FELLOW CREATIVE ANGEL FACE FRIENDS