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Another great chapter champ! just a few things. 1. when you switched in one of the chapters, it was sort of freaky, like first he was digging, and then he was cutting off some guys arms. next, what happened to the characters from the first chapter? is this like a time where the people sort of switch to others? and there was a f- word in there, so you may want to flag it that it has some mature language in it. other than that though, amazing chapter! I look forward to reading more.
I enjoyed this part more then the part before this even though it is long . I didn't catch any grammar or spelling errors. What a crazy doctor you thought of trying to make s zombie everyone knows that usually ends bad.
I would like to know a little more about the town's past especially what it's links to the supernatural are.
For example why would there be a werewolf and dose anyone that's lived in the town for a long time know about it. Overall though got my heart racing wondering if one of them was going to die. Defiantly will be reading more to see what happens.
Keep up the writing you are doing a good job
Thanks, the first part of the second chapter, which I uploaded this morning explains the werewolf.