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Another great chapter! but as I said in the last one, you might want to flag it as mature, there are some cusswords in it. other than that, ther were a few minor spelling and grammar mistakes in it. the book is very well written and I would love to read more of your work! in fact, it is very influential to my own works, on UNLEASHED:AWAKENING. keep up the good work! -Andy