Gleaming and Dreaming

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I wrote this little piece for myself. I deem it rather appropriate for today, as I am celebrating my 701 year in Paris, Texas.

Sharty, gleaming Sharty
Pride of the poets past
Oh, how your smile does glow!

Sharty, dreaming Sharty
Of unabiding knowledge
How all admire you so!

Sharty, beaming Sharty
Oh, how you sparkle
Your eyes, as fine as snow!

Sharty, scheming Sharty
Bane of the spiders
With your coming do they go!

Sharty, screaming Sharty
Voice clear as crystal
Like water does your singing flow

Sharty gleaming, Sharty dreaming
Sharty beaming, Sharty scheming
Even screaming, Sharty, teeming-
you are with grandeur




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Well done!

701 yr in Paris great!

Sharty, gleaming Sharty
Pride of the poets past
Oh, how your smile does glow!


Nice starting.

And every starting letters of every sentence doesn't necessarily have to be in caps.

In all it was good,but strange.

Keep writing and Enjoy! :)
Last edited by Shine on Sun Aug 20, 2006 6:40 am, edited 1 time in total.
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A nice (but very strange) ode. XD
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