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Hey YWS world!
I had a thread like this a while ago, but it got lost somewhere. Anyway, I decided to start a new one. I promise to provide you with high quality, detailed reviews of your work as long as it does not fall under the following categories:

1. Poetry
2.Lyrics
3. Fan- Fic
4. Pieces over 2,000 words (I simply do not have the time to write a high quality review on a piece longer than that).
5. Pieces which have two or more detailed reviews. By that I mean, reviews which offer numerous tips on how to improve your work, as opposed to feel good reviews. Come on, so many people don't even get one! Go back, use the advice in those reviews, edit your work and THEN come to me :)

Your piece will also achieve a STAR rating from me :p

This will be out of 10* stars

10 stars= Fantabulous :D (Nothing to do here)
9 stars= Almost Fantabulous
8 stars=Well on its way to Fantabulousness
7 stars= Sort of Fantabulous
6 stars= Awesome
5 stars= Ok, nothing to brag about.
4 stars= Has potential, but nothing great yet.
3 stars= Seems rushed, with careless errors, but ok
2 stars= Very rushed, not ok :(
1 star= Needs a lot of work!

But worry not, on YWS, you will always find a way to push your story to a 10, as long as you are willing to put in the effort :)

I don't know if yours truly is a 10 on any level yet, but I have immensly improved because of this site.

In case you're wondering about the name of my review thread, my name means 'Star'. Haha, I'm so clever. Not.

*Previously 5 stars, but who can fit this awesomness in 5 stars?
Last edited by Hecate on Tue Dec 04, 2012 4:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.




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could you kindly give my story chapter a look over?
It might be over 2k words, iunno haha but would you humour me?
Thank you in advance




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BlackXcat wrote:could you kindly give my story chapter a look over?
It might be over 2k words, iunno haha but would you humour me?
Thank you in advance


I'd love to, but please link me to it.




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Hey can you review my poem? here is the link work.php?id=98132
Either write something worth reading, or do something worth writing. -- Benjamin Franklin




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As I specified above, this would not be possible. I read it, and I liked it, but I can, in no way, offer you feed back. I am sorry.




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Hey, Star!

I have a short story that I would really love some feedback on. :D

You can find it here: work.php?id=98140

Thanks so much! :D

Neva




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Done! Nothing like a Math test coming up to fuel my motivation for reviewing! :) Keep 'em coming!



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