The Wonderland Rift DT

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A suggestion:
Yamani is actually Miranda's younger sister (it didn't say anything about Yamani's age in her profile), and Miranda was supposed to become the next queen.
Yamani and Miranda's parents were not very kind monarchs so most people didn't like them (including James, obviously). Miranda loved her parents anyway but wanted to become a better monarch in the future.
Miranda and Yamani never really got along, both being too self centered, and when their parents decides that Yamani is supposed to marry James all hell breaks loose since Miranda had a thing for James.
Yamani tells James that if he kills the king and queen and lets her take the throne he and Miranda can go and live happily ever after, but Miranda stops him, pleading for her parents' lives.
Since people are so unhappy about the king and queen Yamani manages to gather a bunch of rebels and preform a coup d'état. The king and queen are killed and the rebels come after Miranda who manages to escape from the castle. She is of course devastated over this and thinks that James was the one who killed her parents. Yamani quickly disposes of the rebels and takes the throne for herself.

What do you think guys, hate it or love it?
Btw, I made a bunch of assumptions about Yamani, sorry about that, ShadowVyper. Oh, and I still don't know how the duchess is involved in it xD
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I love it!
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Yey! :) I hope ShadowVyper does too.
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Whoops, sorry, I sorta forgot about this thing for a bit. I didn't mean to abandon it, I was just looking for a good point to enter. That and I've been having some complications with Internet access.
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When will you post???
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When I'm caught up and have found a good place to jump in.
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Barrett is up for some kind of interaction.... from anyone.... -_-
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If i can get near a computer while i'm in school i'll see what i can do chupatoasta
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Feel free to step in on Lord Lordshire and Alcander.
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@Janika- Who is your character based off of?


Sorry I hadn't seen your post until now. My character in't really based off of anyone. Why do you ask? Also, here's a link to the DT. I thought i'd posted one, but I don't see it any where.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=95569
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I realized that you were just a rebel soldier after I posted that question. If your character had been based off a Wonderland character, it would have been nice to know, but it wasn't, so all is cool.
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Hey, chupatoasta. If you want I can have Jasper meet with you.
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Hey everyone!

It's fine with me, for Yamani and Miranda to be sisters and all that. I think that Yamani will have to be a bit jealous that her husband is having an affair with her sister, especially a sister who she's not on good terms with, but this still works for me. Yamani could secretly be jealous. I think it's a good plan.

Hupa: If you want Barrett to mingle with the queen, I'm up for it. I just wasn't sure how to approach her.

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Hey you guys. Sorry I haven't been posting. I'm just waiting on ERANBEAR to post.
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janika wrote:Hey you guys. Sorry I haven't been posting. I'm just waiting on ERANBEAR to post.

Haha, that makes two of us xD
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