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Will

"I don't know what that means," I answered. It took a huge effort just to talk--I hoped my voice wouldn't be too garbled. "And I won't be going anywhere near the water; I can't really walk right now. Just make sure you don't--wait. How would you know what your clock's doing? Where are you?!"

"I'm in my room," Alysha replied, deadpan. "I went back to get some jewelry--"

"You did what?!" I was screaming by then, sitting bolt upright despite how sore I was. "You're back on the ship?! You know, it's miracle there's still air in your room, and if that thing shifts at all, it could collapse, and--"

"Just relax, okay?" Alysha interrupted. "I'm working on it. Oh, crap--"

"What?" I said. "What?!" But there was a burst of static, and the sound cut out.

I started fiddling with the dials, but a paramedic walked over and took it from me. "Look," he said. "I don't care how good you feel; you have to leave your oxygen mask on. And there's someone looking for you...you know anyone named Lindsey?"

Lindsey

After talking to Alysha, I go back out to find Will. I start to panic when no one is out on the beach. I run back into the hotel and ask everyone I see if they have seen Will. "If I see him, I will let you know." Is the only responce I get. I run around like a chicken with its head cut off.

The I turn to walk down the hallway and I see him come out of Alysha's room. Why did I not think to go back in there? I run to him and hug him. He is in shock, but he hugs me back. I tilt my head up and plant a kiss on his lips. "I was so worried about you."I say. I do not say what I am about to, but the words come out. "I love you!" I say.

Ummm I do not know. What ever is fine with me.

Spoiler

OK, I'll just go with the original (at least I think it's the original).

Will

Lindsey ran over and pulled me into a bear hug, knocking my oxygen mask off in the process. The sudden motion made me very queasy, but I hugged her back--I was just happy she was okay. She kissed me quickly, and then pulled away slightly. "I was so worried about you," she exclaimed. She hesitated for a moment, and then said, "I love you!"

"I love you, too." I responded reflexively, and didn't realize until a moment later what I had just said. I had been thinking it for days; I just hadn't had the courage to actually...say it.

Lindsey

"I love you too." He says. I smile when he does.

I pick up the mask and put it back on he face. "Sorry." I say.

"It's fine." he says.

He keeps his arms around me and holds me close. "I though I was going to loose you." I say

-alysha-


The walkie talkie cut out for a few mins , the clock was at 20 seconds , then i relised it was a bomb , i turned the walkie talkie on then back on and started to talk into it saying " Will! will are you there???!!!?? " , there was a burst of static for a few seconds then i heard on the raido " Alysha?" someone muttered , i couldnt work out who it was but then i said " Put will on please" a few seconds went by then i heard willl say " hello?" , i said back " Will , keep everyone away from the wreck!" he started to panic and said " WHAT? WHY?" , i waited a few seconds then i said " My clock , its got 15 seconds , its a bomb !" , the walkie talkie went dead , i started to open the door , but it wouldnt open anymore , on the other side i saw a diver welding my door shut and swimming off , i ran around my room and i found nothing so i threw the walkie talkie at the window , the window cracked and started to let water in , the bomb got wet and started to short circuit and it went down to 10 seconds , i walked up close to it and punched my hand into the window , and all water started to flow in , i grabbed my stuff and forced my way out the window , and swam for it , within 5 seconds i was at the surface , and started to swim for it , i was about 1 meter away from it when the bomb exploded , it made a massive geyser then it made a huge wave , it went up about 6 meters and started coming towards me , i started swiming despretaly , but it was no use it pulled me up to the top , then dropped me back down and kept repeatly rolling me , within 10 seconds i was on the beach , bleeding from my stomach , arms , legs and my hand, within a few seconds of laying on the beach , i was in a pool of my own blood, within a matter of 5 minutes i was unconsious.

Will

I was about to kiss Lindsey, but a loud boom made me jump. The ground shook, and a blast of water shot up into the air, sending eight, nine, ten-foot waves crashing to shore. I sat up sharply, and Lindsey spun around, her hair almost slapping me in the face. "What was that?!" I exclaimed.

Lindsey

I let out a wimpering cry and cling to Will. "I do not know." I say.