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THE TWINSTERS
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You were born, in the year 3000 AD. You had a twin. It is now the year 3015, and you are now 15 years old.
The twins were altered when they were born. Something went wrong. Really wrong. One twin turned out sweet, loving, kind, generous, and everything good. Beautiful and all. The other twin turned out the exact opposite. Mean, hateful, unkind, greedy, and everything bad. Ugly and all. They were seperated. Somehow, they did this trial to three sets of twins. Each girl had a boy twin, and each boy had a girl twin. Two girls turned out good, one bad. Two boys turned out bad, and one good. The good teamed up with the good, and the bad with the bad. From now on, they were called the Twinsters, or Twisters.

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The bad ones plan to take over the world with new technology. “No mercy. Pain. Suffering to all!” is there logo. They are now creating new technology for their own purposes.

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The good ones know of the plan, and are fighting to get their own technology to save the world. They don’t want glory, nor fame, just world peace.

Who are you? Good? Bad?
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Name:
Age: 15
Gender:
Personality:
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Talents:
Strengths and Weaknesses(Include at least four weaknesses and four strengths):
Appearance and outfit (Can be as beautiful as you want)
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Name:
Age: 15
Gender:
Personality:
Talents: (MUST be evil)
Strengths/ Weaknesses (Include at least four weaknesses and four strengths?
Appearance with picture ( and battle outfit) : (remember, they aren’t as pretty or handsome as the good ones)

It is a battle between world peace, and everlasting suffering. Who will win? Nobody knows…
Spots:
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Evil:
Boy- Volten Betten (Flynn?) CrazyNinjaKat
Girl- reserved [color=#808040] enjoyinginsanity[/color] NEED REPLACEMENT FOR THIS PERSON
Boy- Kalef Promert martina100ters
Good:
Girl- Hillary Betten Aloha
Boy- reserved [color=#FF4040] liv[/color] NEED REPLACEMENT FOR THIS PERSON!!!!
Girl- Aladria _____________ Ranger51
PS: THERE ARE ONLY THREE LAST NAMES. FIRST COME FIRST SERVE!!!


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PS, I will be setting up scenes and maybe being some person....

Also, there are some ‘emotional’ things I will talk about. The bad Twinsters usually never fear anything. They could hurt their twin badly, and not care. Later on, I will allow bad ones to feel bad for the pain they are giving to the good ones. Since the bad ones have the upper hand, cruelty, they do lots of stuff that really hurts people. The good ones mostly feel sorry for their twin. They hate that it turned out this way, and they just want peace. I will talk about this later on in the SB.
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EDIT: I'd like to withdraw my name from the Storybook due to sudden school related responsibilities.

EDIT: Nevermind the above statement. Lol, turns out I'm in this 'til the end!
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Can I have a good character? I'm not sure if I want a boy or a girl yet...
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Okay. Ranger51, you get a girl... That's all that is left besides an evil boy....
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Name: Kalef Promert
Age: 15 (They all have to be 15 right?)
Gender: Male
Personality: Kalef would have been an amazing older brother if the scientists hadn’t changed him. He is now pure evil. He gets very spiteful sometimes. Now that he’s with the other evil twinsters, he isn’t as lonely. For ten years he lived as a normal kid, but with severe anger problems. He had foster parents, and never knew that he had a sibling. Until now, he still doesn’t know about his twin. He just thinks that she is an enemy. Evil has a grip on him, but he hates it. When he was 14, a year ago, he met a girl in school. Not just a normal girl, but a girl of outstanding beauty. He fell in love with her, and she fell in love with him. But when Kalef turned 15, his life changed. He had anger spells, where his eyes turned reddish, he spit up fire, and he seemed to get stronger. The girl became afraid of him, and started dating another guy. Once, Kalef saw the other guy with her, and he became so angry that he strangled the guy to death in front of his girlfriend. Embarrassed, he ran away, and then is when he found the other twinsters. He still has a tiny soft spot where the girl had fit in… but it’s hard to get to it.
Talents: One weird supernatural talent is that he spits fire. When he’s angry, his eyes turn red, and he can breathe flames of fire. Also, when he’s angry, he gets really strong. Besides that, he is very technology-knowing. He loves creating new stuff, etc....
Strengths/ Weaknesses: Strenghths—He never gives up. Never. He, as I said, is very strong, and therefore, is a great battler.
Weaknesses: When he comes to see his sister (in the future) he will probably know it. He’ll hate himself more for turning evil, and might even attack the other evil twinsters. Who knows….
Appearance with picture: Picture of his outfit:
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It’s like the one of the Green Goblin in Spiderman, but red. The mouth opens so he can spit fire. He also has many things built in. He has fire jets (in the arms so he can shoot them) he has flying jet shoes, and much much more….
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Also, this is how he actually looks.
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and also this
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Girl it is, then! I'll start working on the profile.
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Every one... Check your messages. I sent you one.....
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Name: Aladria Promert

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Personality: Aladria is generally known as the kind of person who will sacrifice anything for others. She's willing to get herself hurt for others. She's very quiet and gentle, and is good at reading people. However, she doesn't understand how anyone could do evil. She's humble, but she also believes in herself and will take risks if she feels like they'll do any good.

Talents: Aladria has the talent of reading emotions. She can't read thoughts or anything, or what causes the feelings, but she can tell if someone is angry or happy or nervous, even if they're hiding it.

Strengths and Weaknesses: Strengths: Aladria is willing to do whatever it takes to help people and is very good at reading people, even considering her gift. She's a good runner and has a very strong moral core to her. Weaknesses: Although she can run well, Aladria isn't good at lifting or climbing things, and she doesn't have much stamina. She doesn't understand how the evil twins can be evil; they confuse her, despite her abilities. She has the tendency to freeze up when in danger, and although she's intelligent, complicated technological stuff is completely beyond her field of knowledge.

Appearance and outfit: Aladria is about five foot five with ashy blond hair, fair skin and grey-blue eyes. She's usually smiling.
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She'll really wear almost anything, although she doesn't like short shorts. (They make her feel like she's flaunting herself.) Normally, she wears a blue shirt and white or khaki kapris or jeans.
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Image Exactly ike this, but the dress would be a shirt.


Is this good, or do I need to change anything?
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Can I reserve the last spot for the evil boy?




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Of course. *Reserving spot*
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Good Gal


Name: Hillary Betten

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Personality: Hillary’s a decent person, having a caring heart and a warm manner in her hospitality, generosity and empathy towards the other good twins and people in general, except the evil twins. She’s easy to talk to, real down to earth, and playful. She’s not too fond of talking in the sweetest tones or being overly sweet. It’s just not her style. She’s more of an edgy and feisty girl.

Talents: She's a chameleon. Her greatest talent is being able to adapt to changing circumstances and being able to blend with the crowd, in disguise or as herself.

If she or someone she cares about is in jeopardy during an encounter with the evil twins, she’ll go head-to-head with them, being almost equally as brutal. She’s not proud of it, but it’s just something she believes she’s compelled to do in order be the one who comes out alive.

Being well versed in a variety of fighting styles, she’s nimble and fast on her feet. Her exceptionally special craft is knife handling. She carries many smaller blades hidden in her outfits all the time.

Strengths and Weaknesses: Hillary can occasionally grow irritable and the other twins sense this by how quiet and serious she becomes on the outside, and on the inside, impatient and defensive. Although, in spite her mood, if her conscience compels her to be nice, she’ll be nice. Just don’t expect it to come as fragrant as a bowl of cherries; she’ll appear to be irritated, indeed, handling things in such a way, but her intentions are good. Anyone who knows her in this state knows she means well in spite of how annoyed she’d look at them. It doesn’t last; she’ll soon be her chill self in no time.

Then again, if she feels backed into a corner during one of her mood swings, she’s quick to jump to surfacy conclusions that are likely to be wrong. However, if she has her facts straight, those conclusions could very well be right. In dangerous situations, she’ll quickly jump to someone’s defense in order to get them out of the line of fire, almost to a point of not even thinking before she does it.

So, give or take, her impulsive nature can work for and against her. She’s usually calm and collected in heightened, or stressful, situations. In this state of mind, her impulsive actions work in her favor because she’s able keep a clear mind and think on her feet.

She is a rational and strategic thinker. She also thinks of herself as more of a reinforcer than a technical genius, but she’s a quick learner and knows the fundamental basics of technology, even a few cunning tricks of her own.

She has strong loyalty to the other good twins and shows compassion toward innocent civilians who may be in harm’s way. It’s her passion in doing what she can to make the world a better place that fuels her in the fight against the evil twins.

Negativity rarely ever fazes her. When something does disturb her, though, it tends to haunt and distract her from present happenings which can cause her to slip up. Then she beats herself up about it because she knows she could do better as soldier and defender of the innocent. And generally, when she makes mistakes she’s hard on herself.

Troubling events in her past have sharpened her resilience, increased her endurance to push through uncomfortable situations and trained her to be street smart, being able to read people quite easily.

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Her eyes are a soft, gray-green. She has creamy-pale skin and straight dark-chocolate brown hair; the way its cut in layers to fall just above her shoulders, it naturally has a gentle bend on the ends. She’s aware of her beauty but she doesn’t let it consume her. In fact, she rarely pays it any mind at all.
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Evil Boy


Name: Volten Betten (Volt)

Age: 15 years old

Gender: Male

Personality:Volt is Icy. He doesn’t talk much, gets along with people even less and never lets anyone stand in his way. He often takes risks and constantly wants more power then he already has and tends to go through life with a dark sense of humour. He is loyal though and will stick by people he considers allies or even friends until the end- unless of course- they prove untrustworthy.

Talent: Volt's has a perfect aim- which makes him really good with weapons.
He never misses what he aims for. (except when he is angry he sometimes forget to aim.)

He is also really fast (but not superantually so) and has a way to 'make do' with very few resources.

Strengths: Volt is very fast on his feet, has a brilliant sense of aim (he rarely misses what he aims at.) and is quick witted (which makes him a brilliant liar as well as helping him to get himself out of any ‘difficult situation.’)

Weaknesses: He doesn’t do well at communicating with people (sure he can give orders and scare people but mostly can’t keep up a conversation to save his life.)- preferring to be by himself. He often takes things way too far. His twin will also be another one of his weaknesses as he will not know what to make of her and in the end he won’t really want to hurt the only family member he knows he has as he has always thought of himself as alone- not even having known any family member.(of course he would never really admit this to anyone.)

Appearance: Volt is tall for his age and has a lanky but compound build. He has intensely pale skin, a mop of straight dark hair that falls in his face and icy blue eyes. At first glance people would not call him handsome.
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