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It's finished!!! YAY! LOL

Here it is~

(Verse one)
I still remember when we first met
The sound of the rain-drops and songs that we’d get

(Verse two)
Just like the sunset, where we’d always let go
The smell of the ocean, you held me down low

(Verse three)
Because I’ve been always so good,
And I know that you should,
Be my hero,
And light up my days,
But now you just turn skies to grey

(Chorus)
Because I’d never think we’d have say this
But It’s not right now we keep it like this
The life of us isn’t like our first kiss
You told me you loved me so why did you go-o?

(Verse four)
I think that your loosing you're head
When you left me I felt I was dead

(Verse five)
But when you called me, that one shallow day
I thought you would say it again

(Verse six)
Because I’ll be waiting for you
And you’ll be seeing my view
Like a fast train compared to you it’s like,

(Chorus)
Because I’d never think we’d have say this
But It’s not right now we keep it like this
The life of us isn’t like our first kiss
You told me you loved me so why did you go-o?

(Bridge)
Like sunshine on the top because you
Just might be getting the news that I don’t
Need you anymore…
Like rainbows will count as a score
And hearts will never be ignored but
Ever since you said I was More and this is,

(Chorus)
Because I’d never think we’d have say this
But It’s not right now we keep it like this
The life of us isn’t like our first kiss
You told me you loved me so why did you go-o?

I’ll be waiting for you and
It’s not right how we keep it like this,
You told me you loved me so why did you go-o?
Why did you go?
Oh..
Why did you go?
Last edited by PixieStix on Thu Apr 12, 2012 12:10 am, edited 1 time in total.
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That's great, PIx : )
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
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Thank you :)
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I'm planning to sing it to him.
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Wow, I really, really like it. My favorite part is the ending stanza and verse one. The only thing is 'this' and 'this' don't really rhyme and it's not completely clear what 'this' is. It's amazing. I can almost here someone singing the last stanza in my head, wonderful job, Pixels!
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lol. Thank you! I try. :D
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Here it is : )

Made friends with the flowers,
in the garden I grew.
Let them overwhelm the
beauty of the image
I knew..

Though I didn't plant
the bleeding hearts,
or the rose bush
in the back,
nor the tulips or
the orchids
that I didn't think
would fit.

Each brought a
different glory,
a different glow,
a different shine.

The bleeding hearts
I set against the
yellow siding,
complimenting
the shadows at
sunset.
Emotional,
as the name suggests,
but taking great
moments and
adding the powder
of Pixie-stix.

The rose bush,
thorned at each end,
looked best near
the chimney,
the thorns creating
their own light.
So deep and
soaked in
perception,
taking the mind
of the movement
to master it in the end.

The tulips I set
near the white
picket fence,
to compliment
the afternoon
sunlight of a
heart worn best.
Bright and
optomistic,
taking each
situation
and adding
a little crazy
to the word
psycho.

The orchids sprung
up near the window,
reaching towards
the skies.
In both violet blue
and lavender,
they bring the
calm of the tides
of the ocean
the colors miss.

How could I forget
the daisies, who
only sprout
now and then.
Or the black-eyed
susans, who stand
tall to watch
and listen.

I made friends with the flowers,
in the garden that I grew.
Let them overwhelm the
beauty of the image
I thought I knew...
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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Nice well done I love it!
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Thank you : ) I think that's the longest poem I've ever written...
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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That's so sweet, Rocky! Thanks, I love how you incorporated us and the flowers into the poem. It makes me smile so wide. I love it! :)
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Thank you : ) It was fun to write.
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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LOL....That's amazing!
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Lol. I wouldn't say that... But thank you all <3
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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It WAS amazing Rocky :)
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Lol. If you say so...
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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