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You have us, Biggles!

And I've let my mom read the first accomplished story I've done. But that was two years ago...
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i need opinion. if i had a close friend or something then family would be out of my choice. plus i never use to let them see my work till the very end when i'm done and some time pass by and its no longer a problem
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Lol the first story I ever wrote and my parents read was when I was five...
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My mom's a pretty good critic, I'm suspicious of whether or not my dad even reads my work (he only commented on the prologue when I sent him, like, 50 pages) and my sister is too harsh too soon. She said my story was unrealistic when I was still writing it and nowhere near ready to start editing.
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thanks rocky!
but do you guys know who seshoumaru is?

i'm working on my novel and fanfic
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if my dad sees my work he'll just look through it thinking its school work. he wants to know how i do in school, so he always looks at our peicem of paper lying around
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Biggles, I can give you opinion. I'm very skilled in the art of opinionating. But I don't know who seshoumaru is.

And, Pix, that was just the first one I finished. it was like eighty pages long.

And, CPM, that's exactly why I don't show them.
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
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I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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Lol. I want to see The Avengers sooo bad!!
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Same here!!! Lol
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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he is the guy in my avvie
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Lol. I love The Black Widow in it. She's an amazing actress.
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whats that?
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Cool, Biggles. He has some seriously long hair. Lol.

And my favorite is Tony Stark. Robert Downey Jr. is just amazing.
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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Lol. You mean the guy that plays Iron Man?
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Oh yes. Lol. He's so funny.
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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