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Diablo Draco~~~~~~Evil

I couldn't believe what happened. She kissed me. She actually kissed me. I almost shifted when I realized where I was. The room itself was too small for a full dragon to squeeze in, even without my vast collection of stolen treasure. I got on my feet. "Getting past Rey de las arañas will not be easy, mi gatito. His spiders are everywhere and I hate to be bitten. Even if I shift to a dragon, I can still get bitten from certain vulunerable parts of my dragon body. Me gustaría que se le aplaste como el error que él es."
She asked me do I always speak Spanish.
I had to confess. ". It's the way I was raised. I was born and raised in México, so Spanish and English are my native languages. I know it's hard for me to be among English-speaking shifters, but it's worth all the fun I had while it lasted."
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Adrian

It was thanks to the sharks that I was not bitten. In some kind of fascination, I watched them. Every now and then one of them would brush up on me to make sure that I was still okay. They were making slow circles around us, always moving, always keeping watch.

I had administered ointment on to Laiel's bite's, but I also knew that the ointment would take a while to work. In the mean time it was my job to make sure he taken care of. Which means that I was right by his side.

I could feel the fear swelling off of him, and I was also sure that the sharks could smell it. I always heard that they could smell fear. Unconsciously, reached out my hand and linked it with his. His head automatically snapped toward me. I gave hims the best smile I could, hoping it would clam him down.

Suddenly, Bighton shouted something. A couple of the sharks that were swimming around sped off to help him, while other's remained guarding. Sounds like company...

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How do you get ointment in the ocean?
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I think it was before we went into the water, at least that was how I interpreted it in Bookworms post anyway... :?:
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I was thinking the same thing... and breathing apparatuses.

Laiel


There were sharks. Everywhere. Laiel tried to keep calm, tried not to just swim away as fast as he could. The woman was back; her mouth was opening in a silent scream. Laiel considered screaming too.

Suddenly, Adrian grabbed his hand. He whipped his head around, automatically flinching. Adrian smiled, and Laiel felt warmer. A little.

Blighton shouted something about jumping. Jayden and Elsa were up there, on a cliff. Apparently, Blighton wanted them to jump down into the sharks - something Laiel could never have done. Except that he was already down here, surrounded by them. And he didn't even know if they were alone other than that.

He hoped Adrian thought it was seawater on his hand. He hoped she didn't feel him shaking. For no particular reason, the dead woman grinned. She had shark's teeth. Jaws wide, she leaped at him - then vanished. Laiel shivered - he wished it was cold, so he would have an excuse. But then he saw Adrien again, still holding his hand, still trying to smile. Warmth seemed to spread through him - she was there, with him, and she was trying to comfort him. Does that mean she cares about me? He stopped shaking and took a deep breath.
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Roger -

Imagine that you're lying in bed at the middle of the night, trying to go to sleep, and out in the distance you hear a car alarm blaring the words "oh shit" again and again. You wait for someone to turn the alarm off, but nobody does, and you're stuck there with no idea how much time had just passed. But you just want to get it over with. That's a somewhat accurate description of what was going through Roger's head as he came face to face with Gale and his army of spiders.

"Well?" Gale stated

"Look, I-I really don't want to be dragged back into this," Roger said, trying to avoid looking at the giant army of frickin' spiders. "I'm kind of aware that all the shifters went a little...you know," Roger began making a circular motion with his finger around his right ear "batshit. Myself included. And I just want to get away from all that, so if you can just point me to the nearest phone or map or something, and I'll....be on my way. Okay?"

"If you don't help me," Gale said, commanding more of his spiders to flood the room, "I'll have my army eat you from head to toe".

"Oh shit," Roger said, "Can spiders even do that? You know what, I don't really wanna find out. Let me just get to the point. All I am capable of is turning into a ferret...You know what a ferret is, by the way, right? They're like little rat things- well, weasels technically, but-"

"I know what they are." Gale said.

"Okay good. Where was I? All I can do is turn into a ferret, steal stuff, and write jokes for stand up comedy acts. If you want me to write jokes for like a sitcom or something, I'd be glad to help. But other than that, I don't see how I would be able to do anything.".
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As much as I love how alive this sb is, its just a tad bit too alive... like a freaking 3 new pages worth of alive. Was I the only one who got the 'slow down guys' pm O.o


Hunter

I continued to lie down on the ground in a curled up fetal position. My cheeks were tear streaked yet I didn't have the heart to wipe them away. Everyone else was long gone and I just stayed there, poison slowly seeping through my blood and anguish filling up everything else.

I picked myself up grudgingly and wiped away some blood from my mouth. I shifted back into a cheetah and fled towards the forest. It was just about 20 leaps later when I found that I was no longer moving. No longer conscious for that matter.


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Hunter's going to be MIA a while because honestly, from everything she's been through, she should actually be dead now XD I keep on forgetting that she's still human and well, die-able.




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Cora

I walked over to a spider.

"What are you doing?" He came forward with slight interest. I let the spider crawl onto my finger, getting over my fear rather quickly.

"Tell Gale Cora needs to talk to him," I said.

The spider scuttled out through a crack in the door. In a minute, in which I'd done no explaining to DIablo, Gale came through the door.

"What do you want?," he asked bruteishly.

I leaned over and whispered in his ear, out of hearing range of Roger or Diablo, "I want to help."

"And him?," he motioned to Diablo, who looked up like a dog expecting a treat.

"Taken care of."

"Good." Gale led me out of the cave shutting the door loudly on Diablo's screams for me.

"I've been thinking,-"

"And feeling claustrophobic," Gale interrupted.

"That I could be your spy."

Gale nodded and he looked as though he approved, but I could never tell with him, "Excellent, we have much to discuss."
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Gale- Evil

I didn't trust Cora, of course not, but I had to give her a chance.
"To make it clear, I'll be watching you. If you show even the slightest hint of hesitation... well, my spiders are always hungry"
Cora nodded like she understood.
"Go to the forest. Find me Hunter- she's unconscious. Bring her back to me"
"Fine" said Cora, and dashed away.
As her back was turned, I flicked a house spider onto her back, and it hung there, unnoticed.
"And as for Diablo" I muttered, hunkering down next to him. "Wake up, friend"
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Diablo Draco~~~~~~~~~~Evil

I groaned in disgust. Once again Rey de las arañas took the crown jewel of my collection without trading first. I've had it with him. He had no right to take what was mine without trading first. I turned around and had my back facing him. I growled, "No habrá más que recibir órdenes de una araña. You should know better than to take her from me without trading first. If you offered a trade first, then I would not be so upset. You've been there when the squad was whole. It's always trade first, then take. Never the other way around." I stayed right there. "¿Quién murió y se la araña que el jefe de todos modos?"
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Gale- Evil

"Steady on, friend" I said, raising my hands. "I promise, once you help me conquer the redbacks, I'll give you as many jewels as you want. Black diamonds, rubies, anything. Again, you'd be surprised at the amount spiders hoard"
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Diablo Draco~~~~~Evil

I growled deeply, growing more furious. "That does not change the fact that you took what was mine without trading first. My collection looked complete with her and you took her without even trading for her. Nada más. Unless you give me back what was mine, I am not going anywhere." I curled up and wrapped my tail around me very cat-like. "Next time you steal from this dragon, he will take what is his in a heartbeat. You should know better than to steal from me. An amigo never steals from another."
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Gale- Evil

"Well then" I said, quietly. "Cora will be back as soon as she gets back Hunter. Unless she escapes. If she does, you both die. If she comes back, you live. Simple as that. If you wish to fight me, feel free"
My spiders surged forward and pinned him down.
"I'll leave you to, ah, think things over"
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Adrian

I could feel Laiel's hand continued to shake as I held on to mine. I felt bad because there was nothing I could really do for him exactly at that moment beside be there for him. Every now-and-then I would glance over at him and his eyes would be fixated forward. Fear shined bright in those grey-blue eyes and it killed me.

Suddenly, it occurred to me it might be the spider venom kicking it, he was decorated in bites after all. I'm not sure what kind of spider bit him, but I absolutely sure that some caused venom hallucinations. I gentility let go of his hand and swam in front of him. His eyes were unfocused and frantic. As softly as I can, I place my head on the side of face. It was as if the touch turned on a switch. His eyes came back into focus and he seemed to clam down.

Thank god. I thought.


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Blighton-

Jayden jumped. I quickly stood on a shark and prepared to catch him. He fell closer and I jumped, grabbing him so that the impact didn't kill him and would hit me.

We plunged underwater, where I shifted and pulled Jayden to the surface. I would be sore tomorrow, but I saved Jayden's life. I handed Jayden to Elsa, who had flown down.

The spiders were coming across the water again. I ordered the sharks to swim away fast from the shore.
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