Kit's House of Pain

HOUSE RULES

1) If I think you are capable of greater things, I will be strict.
2) I will never have a wishywashy opinion, you will never get a one sentence "that's nice" kind of thing.
3) If I feel your work is especially raw, brave or honest, I will encourage you. If you pull your punches, I will call you on it.
4) I may review it in pentameter, because I enjoy doing that.
5) Poetry, lyrics and short stories preferred but not required
6) Occasionally I will take a while, I do have to play harp for many hours of the day.

Hi! please review my work! really need it ! Here it is :
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Thank-you !

Done and done. Hope your teacher likes it.

Hello!

I need some help with this poem: work.php?id=93355

Caveat: I've always written prose and have literally no idea what I'm doing with poetry. Anything you notice would be helpful, and don't be afraid to rip it to shreds. Also, I'd be happy to review something of yours in return, and though I can't guarantee I'll have a coherent opinion on poetry, I can try. I could definitely review any prose you have. Anyway, thanks in advance!

Doooooone. Twas good, didn't need mauling, just a graze or two.

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That please! Thank you very much. [:

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Please shred and rip and be cruel. Thank you!

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Greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance.

Sorry, I have been without interwebs. Jas, yours is done, just getting through Twit's and Dane's now.

Twit's done. Have to keep reading that one, good story..

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I would love a review.

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I'd love a review as well! :]

Dane is done, getting to you guys this afternoon.

Ahhhsmusch is done. So sorry about the wait. Jas' is almost done.

Jas is done