Good vs. Evil

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Hey Guys!

I'm very sorry to report that I may not have enough space in my schedule to deal with another storybook, I made the mistake of trying to participate in like five. Once again, very sorry.

I give rights to SkyeDragon to kill my character...

REALLY SORRY GUYS!!!
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Alright, I guess you're mine...(laughs maniacally)
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Redfang, so what are your plans with Cinderwich? Because I thought she was bad or does your character not know that yet? Pixie- is there a reason bella is talking to me? Dragongirl- Any specific plans?
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If it could be possible, could we start a battle out of this? Like, turn the tables, Baltazar is defending his kin, though she's evil. What if she used him to allow herself to slip away, into the town or something or other? Just food for thought.
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What I want to know, does Baltazar realize Cinderwitch is evil? Because she's planning to play him to get the gold, even if she completely crushes his heart.
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I like the battle idea but not the idea of me fighting against two dragonborns my character might be a huge royal pain right now but i'm not sure how she'll fare like that. I think Cinderwitch should get Baltzazr to fight me and he not realizing she's evil does it. She then escapes and he realizes he was tricked? I don't think Baltazar realizes that Cinderwitch is bad and is just defending her because Aayta is a brat. Right now I'm unsure of what to do next
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Same.
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Same.
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same the confused part or the battle part?
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I completely agree with Stella's post. If nobody's posted in the SB in 6 hours, I'll be able to get things going in that direction. (Cinder getting Baltazar to fight Aatya)
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I added a secret entrance and thats how i get into the hut.
Ehh, who knows what to put here anymore.




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Umm... you mentioned something about a villan's lair... Baltazar's a good guy...
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what crap
Ehh, who knows what to put here anymore.




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The villains' lair would be deep in the forest. I'd say a cave or underground maybe, but whatever.
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Hey Skyedragon? I have a question. I was opperating under the assumption that this was in an old kinda fantasy type setting (hence the arrow to the wing) but you mentioned cameras when locking up Bella. Care to clarify?
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Once you replace negative thoughts with positive ones, you'll start having positive results.
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