~Bad Wolf Editors~ (accepting & reviewing anything!)

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Before I was ZlyWilk, I was GoldenQuill.
And before I was a Bad Wolf Editor, I owned a Tropical Reviewing Shack.


Welcome aboard The Bad Wolf Incoperations spaceship! To your right is concessions, your left is the restrooms, and straight ahead will take us to the bridge. Oh, no dear--you might not want to pull that lever. No. No, a 'fire drill' doesn't happen in space, there's no outside to go to. No, straight ahead. Come on.

Oh. You wanted something reviewed, didn't you? What do you have? Well that's good! Because I am willing to review:
Everything


Why don't you hand it to me, and I'll see what I can do about this?
Thank you millions!

~Review Log Since Our Ship Set Sail~
Manga girls (colored pencil and digital drawing) by xXTheBlackSheepXx
The Four People Nina Helped (And the One She Couldn't)- P1 by Jas
Special Place for us by PurpleEurope
The Poets by thetraveler
I Won't Let Go by wonderland
Citizen or Solider by VampireSenshi512
You Know When You've Lived by ShaunaJAY
Farmville by Audy
Lost in Nowhere by silentwords
I've Seen a Little Fairy by yubbies21
The Hobbit's Hole by GeorginaMay
Mentors and Heroes (working on the title) by ItalianIlluminist
Mentors and Heroes (working on the title) Chapter 2 by ItalianIlluminist
Last edited by GoldenQuill on Fri Apr 13, 2012 4:37 am, edited 16 times in total.
formerly ZlyWilk

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Hi! Can I request an art review? I posted this a few days ago and still no comments. I'd like to know if there's anything I can work on before I start a new project. Thanks a bunch!
viewtopic.php?f=27&t=92842
And I'd be happy to do a review for you in return, if you need it :)
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The good news is we can't make any mistakes.
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Hi! A review please! :D It's a short story, I'd like a more plot and character based review rather than grammar and spelling and all that. Thanks!

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I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Here's a bit of poetry for you:
[url]viewtopic.php?f=196&t=92939[/url]
Thanks!
Cheers,
thetraveler
"Elementary, my dear Watson"
:D :D :D
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Nice to meet you Zlywilk.

This is long and a disheartening piece, so I'll return the favor if there's anything you yourself want reviewed.

Thanks :)




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Hey (:
I was wondering if you could review a poem for me when you get the chance. viewtopic.php?f=8&t=92782
Thanks alot!
I'd like to think I'm creative... instead of just plain weird ;D




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If you ever get a chance, the story in my signature would appreciate a look-over. Grammar and spelling can be repaired later on, so don't waste your precious time over such that can waste another's time. I mostly want to know how to make the scene more dramatic and terrible.
Quick back-story- Lynnea is a princess. She dressed up as a servant and met another servant (he is a prince but she does not know that.) She is being forced to find a boyfriend because of an old law and her parents think that she is lonely. Oh and they are on a tiny island country off of the coast of Denmark.
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I wrote this not to long ago and am really excited about it. It's being published later this year but I'd like some feedback on it. You said that you would review everything so I'm asking you to do a review for me.

I’ve seen a little fairy

I’ve seen a little fairy
In between the trees
With small bucket and
Tiny brush she dusts
The trees with
Silver shavings
Creating a soft glow

We all have thought
That when winter comes
It is the frost and snow
That lightly covers the trees
And turns them almost white
But no, we are wrong
It is the work of fairies
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Hey :)

I'd really like this reviewed by someone reliable like yourself, I wrote it in school and it seemed quite good compared to the others in my class, but it's probably not compared to the talented people on here :')

Here's the link and thankyou for reading!

work.php?id=94421
If I could think up something that described me accurately enough in 255 characters, you'd be reading something slightly more interesting.




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Hello, and thanks for reviewing

work.php?id=94463
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And once again, I beg of you to review this for me-- it's the following chapter
work.php?id=94518
Thanks. Your help has been much appreciated
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Hello ZlyWilk!

After reading your reviews I must say I'm a big fan. I like how detailed and thorough you are. It looks like you haven't had any review requests for a while so . . . Requesting permission to board the ship!

I have a prologue to my Novel (here: work.php?id=94743) that I'm working on. First attempt at writing serious fiction.
Please let me know what you think.
When I was young I used to have problems finishing my sentences, but now I




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Once again, I come to you to ask for your marvelously detailed reviews.
work.php?id=94837
And, thanks.
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