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Chirantha · 2011-10-10T18:11:19Z

Welcome to the C's Emporium , :D I know I had my thread a while back but I got so busy with my studies that I couldn't even visit the site. But this time, I'm back for good and I intend to review just about anything (I hope) that is thrown at me. My overall reviewing style is giving overview at first, then going over to the general mistakes made in the story. Then I comment on the plot. But my main focus is on descriptions and character descriptions. Then about the title and anything else I want to add, I'd add it at the end of the review. Anyway, you'll see how I review once I review. :wink: Can review :arrow: Action / Adventure :arrow: Fantasy :arrow: Science Fiction (but I won't be able to review it if it is too serious) :arrow: Romance (I'll try my best, because this is not my area of expertise. Not even in real life :wink: ) :arrow: Fan Fiction (I'll have to know the story it's based on, but you really want me to, I could go over the general story without going into the plot.) :arrow: Poetry (I'm not a big poetry person, but I'll do my best) I'll also review novels if you want me to. But give me some time, because I would have to review each and every chapter. Cannot review :arrow: Historical Fiction :arrow: General Fiction :arrow: Lyrics :arrow: Scripts Might be able to review :arrow: Arts and Photography (I'll try my best, but don't expect a great review, because I have little experience in reviewing these. If the story or poem is so complex that only the author can understand it, I won't be able to review it The cost is a cookie per review :D Alright, let the reviewing begin!

Rascalover

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Reviews 456

Thu Nov 10, 2011 7:49 pm

Rascalover says... · Thu Nov 10, 2011 7:49 pm

I need a review please

post933460.html#p933460

It's romantic fiction.

There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

Who needs a review?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html

polinkacreations

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Points 333

Reviews 80

Mon Nov 21, 2011 7:50 am

polinkacreations says... · Mon Nov 21, 2011 7:50 am

Hey:) Hopefully, I am not getting too demanding over here

I have posted two new chapters, care to take a look?
topic90491.html
topic90493.html

Thank you in advance!
Oh, and *hands a cookie*.

"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind." - Dr. Seuss

Chirantha

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Reviews 233

Mon Nov 21, 2011 5:34 pm

Chirantha says... · Mon Nov 21, 2011 5:34 pm

I will review your chapters and the one by Rascalover once my term tests finish, which will be after this Thursday.

Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

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Chirantha

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Fri Nov 25, 2011 9:19 am

Chirantha says... · Fri Nov 25, 2011 9:19 am

Rascalover - Review done!

Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

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KingLucifer

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Sat Dec 03, 2011 8:05 am

KingLucifer says... · Sat Dec 03, 2011 8:05 am

Yea I like a review over here if you don't mind. I been meaning to post up a final chapter but I would like somebody to review the chapter before.

viewtopic.php?t=90819

it's fairly simple action adventure mixed with a bit of fantasy, it should be fairly simple if you don't mind.

An angel, a knight, a man who will bring light to where there is only darkness, I am the Morning Star, the Bringer of Light, hail to me as I am King Lucifer!

Formerly: Avalon

Chirantha

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Sat Dec 03, 2011 4:53 pm

Chirantha says... · Sat Dec 03, 2011 4:53 pm

Polink - Both chapters reviewed.

MasterLHeart - I'll read the first chapter as well before reviewing this shall I?

Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

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Hecate

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Points 6717

Reviews 100

Sat Dec 03, 2011 5:12 pm

Hecate says... · Sat Dec 03, 2011 5:12 pm

Hey! You reviewed something for me previously and I used to love your reviews.
I started working on a new story, and I did put it in general fiction, however it's only because I didn't know where else to put it. It does have supernatural elements but it's not set in a different realm hence not placing it in fantasy. I would totally understand if you choose not to look at it, but if yes, I would be eternally grateful

I mean, if you even do a part of it that'd be nice. Because I probably shouldn't have posted quite so much of it in one go. And this isn't even all of the first chapter... sigh.

topic91113.html

The project's name is Samodiva.

Chirantha

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Mon Dec 05, 2011 8:01 am

Chirantha says... · Mon Dec 05, 2011 8:01 am

Stela - Review done

Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

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