Cover for Alpha - Edited! • Young Writers Society

Chelsea4827

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Fri Aug 26, 2011 12:14 pm

Chelsea4827 says... · Fri Aug 26, 2011 12:14 pm

Hello, these are my designs for Alpha’s cover.

I have edited the side but not the back cover yet

I'll see what I can do later.

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: Side 2.jpg (33.25 KiB) Viewed 142 times

: Back cover resized.jpg (124.71 KiB) Viewed 223 times

Last edited by Chelsea4827 on Mon Aug 29, 2011 12:41 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Fri Aug 26, 2011 1:52 pm

Jalmoc says... · Fri Aug 26, 2011 1:52 pm

Wow! Those look amazing!!

I'm a sucker for the color green and you have quite a bit in there! I also love the preview of the story! It captures the reader's attention really well! Honestly I think that this is going to be a great cover for your book!

Let me know when you actually have it on the book!

Well Keep Writing!!

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ChocoCookie

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Fri Aug 26, 2011 3:15 pm

ChocoCookie says... · Fri Aug 26, 2011 3:15 pm

Nice! It's beautiful! ^^

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Twinkle4ever

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Fri Aug 26, 2011 3:41 pm

Twinkle4ever says... · Fri Aug 26, 2011 3:41 pm

I really loved the cover! It's really beautiful and eye catching. Especially the way Allegiance is written.
The L faded from the top and dark at the bottom. Truly a work of art. (More like a master piece.) You're really good at this stuff. You should keep at it and I'm sure a lot of people are going to like and comment.

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confetti

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Fri Aug 26, 2011 3:46 pm

confetti says... · Fri Aug 26, 2011 3:46 pm

The cover was great, very magical-like. However, the spine and back cover didn't go. Imagine putting those images together and making them one, it wouldn't really work, would it?
Anyways, best of luck in the contest!

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IcyFlame

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Sat Aug 27, 2011 2:44 pm

IcyFlame says... · Sat Aug 27, 2011 2:44 pm

I really like the image you've chosen here, and the font is really beautiful - where do you get them all from?
But as was previously mentioned, the spine and back don't really seem to fit together all too well. The font choice on the back is also a bit... normal? Does that make sense at all? Other than that you've got a great cover! I'm just going to take a look at your competition

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Sat Sep 03, 2011 3:11 pm

theotherone says... · Sat Sep 03, 2011 3:11 pm

Hello there.

I like the images you've put on there, but they seem a little bit blurry. I don't know if it was intentional, or if it was just done that way since you've transferred the photos. I think it doesn't look as professional and as beautiful as it would normally be because of that. There are things you can do to help with that, so I recommend you try to work that around and make it sharper.

Otherwise, it's really good. I haven't read the book, so I don't really know if it fits well with the story, but I have a feeling it does.