Grace

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I love the purity in this and found that it flowed beautifully! It seemed like it came right from your heart and was completely genuine.
"Of course it is happening inside your head. But why on earth should that mean it isn't real?"




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Haha. Sometimes, reviewers can be silly. One time, they yelled at me when they found out that I was going to revise something, because they really liked that work. Then they read my revision, and it actually made them cry because it affected them so deeply. Before, it had simply entranced them

Don't be afraid to revise, if that is something you would like to do. The author is finally the one who knows best... the reviewers are only secondary. :)
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.

"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach

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(This might look familiar to some of you)

I don't consider myself a serious poet. I don't consider myself a poet at all. In fact, I don't believe poetry is my strong point. I'll definitely reconsider my approach to critics. This random piece was just for enjoyment. I've taken seriously the critiques towards every other piece of my work. If you don't believe me, you can look for yourself in my portfolio.

I do appreciate critics. None of you know me personally, so don't claim to. I realize my past actions did nothing to support my appreciation for true critics. I realize what I did was undeniably wrong, and I apologize if I came across as arrogant or prideful. None of this was my intention. I just thought I was writing a poem.

H.



Perhaps one did not want to be loved so much as to be understood.
— George Orwell, 1984