Grace

Dang, that's deep.

It's short enough, but long enough to convey the message.
You rock!
*likes*

God bless!
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-Jojo

This was very beautiful and that's all I really want to say. I hope nobody tries to harshly critique this and mold it into something it isn't. It flowed nicely and had simple, yet deep meaning. Please keep writing!

This is wonderful! Short and sweet, easy to understand but deep. Someone who can put those elements successfully together has talent ( and God's help ).

Very nice!

Wow, I think XxJoJoxX said it best.
This is everything you need to say in four lines. If you can write something this amazing in under five lines, you will be able to write that college essay with no trouble whatsoever, just saying.

If you don't mind me asking, what inspired this?
Also, are you religious or was it just for the voice of the narrator?

Sorry if I'm prying...wonderful job, I mean that.
~SnowBerry

What honestly inspired me to write this is unknown. The words just came to me and I had to write them down.

Personally, I have a passion for Jesus. I guess that would explain the inspiration for the poem. The one thing I want in life is His grace and love, and I know no infernal body or force can provide it.

Thanks everyone for the reviews and likes!

Wow, this was really beautiful. The first sentence captured me completely. My favorite line was: Redemption is what I seek. That was perfect. It was simple, but so greatly composed that it didn't need many words. Great job!

I really liked this poem! It was actually very deep and well structured, without even having to be a whole page long. I also felt the message was a very powerful one :3 ...aren't we all seeking his grace in one way or another

Go Hayden! Well done as always!

This is simply awesome! You've managed to make a poem that rhymes consistently, flows smoothly, and get the message across perfectly! And the fact that you did it in four lines - that is just amazing! This is honestly, truly inspiring.

Good job, now this deserves to be featured. All I have to say, is this was beautiful, and you do have God's grace.

This is beautiful, it's like taking on a lifetime of quotes in one breath, you know. It's just eye widening and beautiful. Keep writing!! There's not much to nitpick,so I'll just leave it at that!!

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This is simply amazing, so deep yet not too hard to understand. Things like this makes me start thinking for myself. Thank you for such an awesome poem!!!

Short but really truly amazing! It sounds deep but it's not really that too hard to understand This is what they call "Write to express, not to impress. "