ommmmmm

You went back home
All I can do is roam
while writing the poem
ooooommmmmmmm

Uttering a buddhist chant
Meditating by a dying plant
Inside an abandoned Tent
oooooooommmmmmmm

"Grande Amore" never ends
Cause' it's more than being friends
It's the love between I and Her
like a bird wrapped inside a fur
ooooooommmmmmmmmmm

Feeling the warmth of Trust
sending away all the lust
true love is all just
Believing in it is a "MUST"
Noureddine <H.>

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Hi there!

This is a really good poem. I like the title. Very creative. You imagery is great and I can imagine everything you're saying. The rhyme scheme is good as well. It didn't seem forced and it flowed well with the reat of the poem.

It's the love between I me and Her

It should be 'me and her', not 'I and her'

Again, great job with this. Keep writing!