Aow, this so very beautifully written! Your use of words, and the way you build up yours sentences, each line is as powerful and I was hooked after the first three words! The theme may be kind of cliché but you made it your own and in many ways it was both original and creative! I love every line and every word... except maybe for where you wrote "evermore" where I think it would sound better if you wrote "anymore" :p But other than that I have got no complaints what so ever! Amazing, amazing poem!
7/5 icky, sticky spiders for this! I was stunned, speachless, so amazed!
Good Luck & Keep Writing
// Demoness
