okay, first off I would like to say that this is not the more "complete" version of "what's not to love?", because I’m using a computer that has an older version of it.
Anyway, I’ve been told that this is just a list of "questions", and if you feel that way too, that's okay. Just please, please give me your opinion ^-^ )
what’s not to love?
What creature that has made itself ready for the hardships of love
Is not commendable to merit affection from another?
And what man that has repented
Is too shameful to deserve respect from others?
What fish is not made for the waters of the earth?
What bird is not made for the cloudbanks of heaven?
What stallion is not fit to graze in the swaying blades of the meadow?
What blossom is too withered to be placed on a tomb?
What lock is not meant to have its own key?
What pounding heart is not precious enough for tides of blood?
What lit flame is too faint to smolder an ounce of
light?
What breeze of airstream is too frail to
Breathe?
What channel of the water-brook is to inept to issue a
Current?
Or for what motivation should a friendless seeker find no console or
Contentment?
Every broken-down life form should be justified for refurbishment
And all lonesome individuals should gain company,
Shouldn’t they?
Or for what is drowning that does not have the license to swim?
What is sightless that does not warrant observing?
What is deaf that does not have the right to perceive sound?
What is voiceless and mute that should be banned from verbalizing words?
Even after midnight, I have not found one sympathetic essence that is not deserving of forgiveness.
One tolerant spirit that should not obtain its reward of patience.
Not a single organism that God has placed on this earth should go without being cherished,
Or should it?
Are lilies more appealing than roses?
Is sapphire lovelier than amethyst?
Is citrus more fragrant than the vapors of lavender?
Are
Not
All
Things
Beautiful?
A sparrow is beautiful. Its silky sleek feathers, its round watchful eyes. . .
Is a dove not beautiful too, though?
When they are both aligned side by side, whom do you favor the most?
The dove is pleasant to the eye, but in the end they are both divine miracles.
They are both assets to be marveled,
Both sensational phenomenon to gaze upon in wonderment.
Why love one and despise the other?
Why advise one to flee but the other to linger?
Why harm one and create a tonic for another?
Why
Raise
One
Up
And thrust the other down
As if it is not as good as its brother?
No,
Not one creature placed on this earth was meant to be an extra.
What heart that beats like crashes of thunder,
That blazes brighter than heavenly flames,
That pierces like ice of the winter tundra,
That harmonizes with the drafting wind of the forest trees,
That collides like powerful ocean waves into the mighty marble stone of the shore:
What man in our midst that we have surrounded
From the sunlight hours of his lonely birth, to the quake of his midnight, should be under a stable surge horror and sorrow because of another?
Because of
You.
Because of
Me.
Should he not, just as all of us long for, be allowed an armored affection?
A shielded love?
And a safeguard that is defended by the most durable of unsheathed blades?
I ask,
What’s not to love?
Anyway, I’ve been told that this is just a list of "questions", and if you feel that way too, that's okay. Just please, please give me your opinion ^-^ )
what’s not to love?
What creature that has made itself ready for the hardships of love
Is not commendable to merit affection from another?
And what man that has repented
Is too shameful to deserve respect from others?
What fish is not made for the waters of the earth?
What bird is not made for the cloudbanks of heaven?
What stallion is not fit to graze in the swaying blades of the meadow?
What blossom is too withered to be placed on a tomb?
What lock is not meant to have its own key?
What pounding heart is not precious enough for tides of blood?
What lit flame is too faint to smolder an ounce of
light?
What breeze of airstream is too frail to
Breathe?
What channel of the water-brook is to inept to issue a
Current?
Or for what motivation should a friendless seeker find no console or
Contentment?
Every broken-down life form should be justified for refurbishment
And all lonesome individuals should gain company,
Shouldn’t they?
Or for what is drowning that does not have the license to swim?
What is sightless that does not warrant observing?
What is deaf that does not have the right to perceive sound?
What is voiceless and mute that should be banned from verbalizing words?
Even after midnight, I have not found one sympathetic essence that is not deserving of forgiveness.
One tolerant spirit that should not obtain its reward of patience.
Not a single organism that God has placed on this earth should go without being cherished,
Or should it?
Are lilies more appealing than roses?
Is sapphire lovelier than amethyst?
Is citrus more fragrant than the vapors of lavender?
Are
Not
All
Things
Beautiful?
A sparrow is beautiful. Its silky sleek feathers, its round watchful eyes. . .
Is a dove not beautiful too, though?
When they are both aligned side by side, whom do you favor the most?
The dove is pleasant to the eye, but in the end they are both divine miracles.
They are both assets to be marveled,
Both sensational phenomenon to gaze upon in wonderment.
Why love one and despise the other?
Why advise one to flee but the other to linger?
Why harm one and create a tonic for another?
Why
Raise
One
Up
And thrust the other down
As if it is not as good as its brother?
No,
Not one creature placed on this earth was meant to be an extra.
What heart that beats like crashes of thunder,
That blazes brighter than heavenly flames,
That pierces like ice of the winter tundra,
That harmonizes with the drafting wind of the forest trees,
That collides like powerful ocean waves into the mighty marble stone of the shore:
What man in our midst that we have surrounded
From the sunlight hours of his lonely birth, to the quake of his midnight, should be under a stable surge horror and sorrow because of another?
Because of
You.
Because of
Me.
Should he not, just as all of us long for, be allowed an armored affection?
A shielded love?
And a safeguard that is defended by the most durable of unsheathed blades?
I ask,
What’s not to love?
Even so, I would advise you to change it. It reads strangely because my mind tries to put emphasis on every single word, since they all have capitalised beginnings. I think it would be a lot better without all the caps. If you disagree don't worry though.
I did really like this though, it impressed me.