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Jayk is open to friendship too. I uh... tried to add some interaction between my character and the others at the table in my little part. I would like it if Liam or Thuake began the conversation (Thuake if possible because he's also an Earth Element, but the two awkward people together wouldn't be bad either).
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shadowraiki wrote:Jayk is open to friendship too. I uh... tried to add some interaction between my character and the others at the table in my little part. I would like it if Liam or Thuake began the conversation (Thuake if possible because he's also an Earth Element, but the two awkward people together wouldn't be bad either).


Before going into the water continent the old woman could suggest that we get to know the fellow Earth fundamentals so that we have a good rapport during any kind of battle.

After that Thuake and Jayk can start getting to know each other.




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Can't wait! Maybe there should be a test of some sort to make sure everybody studied up a bit before going? If the urgency to get them going is too much then it would make sense for them to just go, but they just received their books, no guarantee of them actually having read them.

Of course, this is up to you, Reise! ^_^
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Rory is hoping to try and get the whole group closer. She's bearing down on allies and the troublesome ones first but will certainly make her way around to Liam :)
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That's a good idea, the whole test thing. Okay, time to wake up!
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Arwen is looking for some friends and possibly a BF ... but I seem to have only interacted with Elijah. I'm guessing Jerr likes her? From his last post? Just to clear it up xD
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Have fun getting attacked by masked men everybody! :3
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Attacked? Masked men? What? :)
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Haha. Arwen got pissed xD
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-wipes tears away- Have fun on vacation, Shadow. Your post nearly made me cry. -sniffles- Well, so Shadow defeated our first monster as a way to get his character out and in mystery. He may come back in later and he may not. We won't know until a week later.

I would like for all of you to base your next post off of Shadow's. The mermaid lady, the one that greeted us in my post, was leading us into the main part of the Water Continent when we were attacked by Raphael, one of Karzai's demons. We made it out okay, Alice is helping all the non Air and Water's breathe, but that's going to get tiring so the air and water's are going to have to step in and help.

With our first monster defeated we just need to meet with the King and pick up some things that we will need later.
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The things being weapons


That was a great post, Shadow!
Last edited by Sassafras on Mon Aug 15, 2011 5:36 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Aww, Shadow! That was great. Oh well, I'm off to post.
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Thanks guys. It is kind of sad that I have to go :P I'm going to Canada to visit the church my mom prayed at before I was born (for the bajillionth time). I'm too cheap to buy anything with global wi-fi (hell, I'm not paying 15 bucks a month ;)) so that's the main reason why I dropped out (again, debatable, I don't want you to know if he's dead or alive). Plus, my labtop broke and hotel wi fi is expensive as hell.
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Wow shadow awesome post! Hope you come back soon!

Sad to see a fellow Earth guy go :(




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Aw! Shadow! We'll miss Jayk! Wow, I love all the character's personalities! They're fun to write with :) Though, I didn't get to write with anyone's except for Alice. :)
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Alright so whats the plan with this said king? Is he all like 'I'm Poseidon! Fear meee', or more chilled out? ^_^
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