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The Water Fundamentals are not going to like water world with them being fire and all, but as you can see that's kind of the point. Same goes for the Water Fundamentals in the Fire Continent.
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Awesome. Coolest worlds I've ever seen in a storybook. Epic pictures too. I'm guessing that Each of these lands feels increasingly threatened by Karzai as we get closer to his domain.




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Yes, every land has their problems with Karzai that we are expected to solve. Each land has a mini plot to finish to keep things moving.
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cool. Know I'm being a pain but oh well how will they treat will they be like "ohhh your power is legendary" or will they feel betrayed by us because are ancestor (or whatever) made the world and then left them to the mercy of people like Karzai.




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The personality of the Continents are much like the personalities of the Fundamentals.

Take the things I wrote about how each Fundamental class acts and apply it to the Continents.

Example: Because the people of the Water Continent are easy going, laid back, and trustworthy they will be elated to have the Fundamentals back.

Each Continent will react in a different way.
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Sounds cool! I can totally see the Earth people being like, 'We don't need you. We have managed just fine on our own so far and we will continue to do so'.
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You have this so well planned out! I'm actually extremely excited for this now ^_^.
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I try to have everything planned so there are no "what do we do next" moments.
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Wow this is all so interesting Reise!

And I must say Alice is a very intriguing character, I'll be doing the opposite to what Elijah does, my character will be more intrigued and drawn towards Alice as she shows more "immaturity".

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Sorry my character is picking on Elijah, I need someone to do some banter with and Eli is interesting as she was the first to put what the book said to use in real life (albeit in a destructive way).




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Oh no, Darth, I think it's amazing that you picked with her. I was going to nail you with a few balls of fire but figured we didn't need a brawl in the hall just yet.

*super hugs Dreamwalker* You noticed! :D I'm so happy. I'm in love with Elijah Woods!

ReisePiecey, darling, I love the Continents! The one that I like the best is the Earth Continent, I love it how the trees are holding up that whole civilization.
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Nice reply and I loved how you made my character just continue walking on, you kept him in character. I think banter like this from time to time will be a part of the soul of this storybook :) . Yeah it would have been too early for another fight!

Now to wait for more people t write so that I can continue with Thuake's part!




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So.. does anyone feel like helping me try to put Liam into some form of friendship with people? His character is a bit rough seeing as I hadn't realized how socially awkward a character like him would be until after I had finished the profile. So, as of right now, I'm searching for openings that I think he would rightly take but am finding very few :/

If you feel like helping a bit, please do so! If not, that's okay ^_^ I'm sure I'll find an opportunity to throw him in some point in time.

Onigiri- I'm glad you're alright with my noticing! I was a little worried that the joke wouldn't be taken as such, but it did give the character a funny freak-out moment, so that's pretty cool.
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Well, my characters are friendly with everybody. :)
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Tomorrow we go to the Water Continent. (:
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Stop. Being. A. Genius! Dx /envys Reise

Liam can be friends with Hanna!
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