Lawfirm (Episode 3 released)

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Splintered_Thorn
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Mon Apr 17, 2006 9:57 pm
Splintered_Thorn says... · Mon Apr 17, 2006 9:57 pm
Ok, here's yet another potential series (MBM crashed and burned, so I didn't put it up since it seemed that nobody wanted it on YWS). So I'm trying something more tame. This is the story of a Lawfirm (hints the name). The characters are:
Doris -- Secratary
Bob -- Laywer-in-training
The Lawyer -- the lawyer
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The other 3 characters' names will be revealed as the series continues. So let's just start things off with our fingers crossed. Will this finally be a good series? Possibly. Tell me what you think.

Episode 1!
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(BTW, the reason the person called him Lloyd will be more clear in the next episode.)
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Mon Apr 17, 2006 10:03 pm
Sureal says... · Mon Apr 17, 2006 10:03 pm
Hah hah, now that is far better humour. And the artwork is quite good (especially blondy).
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Mon Apr 17, 2006 10:04 pm
Sponson Light says... · Mon Apr 17, 2006 10:04 pm
Comics GALORE!
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Wed Apr 19, 2006 3:21 pm
Emma says... · Wed Apr 19, 2006 3:21 pm
LMAO! The second one was funny. x]
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Wed Apr 19, 2006 5:09 pm
zell says... · Wed Apr 19, 2006 5:09 pm
lol thats funny :thumb: can you show me how to do that sometime
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Wed Apr 19, 2006 10:44 pm
Splintered_Thorn says... · Wed Apr 19, 2006 10:44 pm
Show you how to do what? Draw these characters? They're pretty easy.

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Thu Apr 20, 2006 12:26 am
Areida says... · Thu Apr 20, 2006 12:26 am
Doris makes me happy, though I think she'd be funnier if the other characters ignored her a bit more. Keep her completely sadistic, though, don't get soft on us!

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Lovin' Doris. Yep.
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Thu Apr 20, 2006 12:54 am
Fishr says... · Thu Apr 20, 2006 12:54 am
LOL! Funny stuff.

I like Doris too but I have one minor complaint with her. She's becoming repetitive by always mentioning death. For me, it's starting to get a little yawnish with Doris's responses but other than that she cracks me up. ;)
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